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for Constructive Possession

by Prism0467

schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"NO SHE WOULD NOT!" I was laughing my ass off reading this! Shika's parents are so awkward, they remind me of my mom. Eww... let's not go there...

I can't wait for the next chapter. I am also wondering what is going on with Kiba and Kabuto! Awesome job as usual.

Peace-Love-Yaoi
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooo the possibilites
person sasunaru
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA!!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!!! I LOVE SHIKA'S MOM HEHEHEHE
YAY!!!! NEJI FINALLY SAID IT "I LOVE YOU" HEHEHEHEHE
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Cracks up* Go Yoshino she is a yaoi fan at heart!! Lol yes Shika's dad does need it, he needs some of Hiashi! Ha! Hiashi is going to stake a claim on Shika's parents lol GO HIASHI I'm rootin for you! *Squeals* Yes! Neji said it! Can't wait to see all the things Neji wants Shikamaru to do to him *drools at images* update soon!
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just saw the pic of Hiashi....

I think I will be drinking my dinner tonight!
person Xoteem
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I can't wait to know what happens next!! :D I love this series!
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that was intense. I can't wait to find out what's going on behind those seemingly innocent eyes of Yoshino's. And I know that Neji's confession is going to be a wonderful piece to read, I just haven't decided on whether I want it to be all love-y done-y or whether I want something a little more impassioned then that. I don't know what you're planning but I know I'll like it either way ^^
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol Hiashi is something else and oh...what is Yoshino planning!? I have a few ideas floating around. Shika's dad just needs to say fuck it (literally) and just do Hiashi and have a threesome or something lol, break the tension! Lol, he knows he'll enjoy it *wiggles eyebrow* and Hiashi and his perverted self will probably find a way to video tape the whole escapade! Yay, Neji told Shika's dad he loves his son!!!! Can't wait to see how Shika reacts when Neji tells him himself! Amazing chapter as always, let the drunkeness and yaoiness continue next chapter lol, update soon!
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sexual Tension is GREAT! I love it. I giggled like a little schoolgirl while reading this. Neji is "The Man" Shikaku can deny that all he wants, but he will never understand. Shikamaru likes to bottom, and I love him as a bottom. I love that you didn't make either of them the "super-uke" I love that they are both strong and very... male... yum.

Great job, as usual.

Peace-Love-Yaoi
person Twiggies
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
Heh, Shikaku and Neji's talk sure was good, and interesting.
And awww, Neji confessed his love for Shikamaru! ..to the father of the partner though. XD
I bet Neji's going to say it to Shika too, sometime soon..

Shikaku shouldn't resist Hiashi so, it's clear all of them want it. XD
And Yoshino! Heh, I hope she's not eating Hiashi alive in the kitchen!
They shouldn't leave Shikaku out of the play. XDD

Very good chapter! Certainly amusing. XD
By the way, Mikoto the judge? I like that. ^_^ And yay for Itachi('s name)! XDD