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by Prism0467

person Twiggies
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! OMG! This is just hilarious. Awesome. XD

It seems like the parents like Neji.
Well, maybe it's too soon to say, but they definitely don't mind Hiashi. :DD
Ahh, Shikaku and Yoshino.. right before the dinner party! Oh poor Neji.. But maybe it was for the best after all XDD

Ahh, just too good. :D
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Can't wait to read more.
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I almost choked and died. You need to put up a warning about not eating or drinking before chapters like that. "pistol packing princess". OMG! I can't even imagine having parents like that. What the heck is going on with those people? Shikamaru was right, Neji does need a loaded clip to put him out of his misery. OMG!

That's going to be one heck of a dinner party. OMG!
person sasunaru
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!! LMAO GOD YOU JUST MADE THIS STORY TEN TIMES BETTER HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA :) PLEASE I BEG YOU UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON OK :)
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Almost forgot.. there was just too much to comment on.

The whole thing about being bottom up out cold in the bedroom. OMG!

I don't have an account on Deviant Art and cannot review but pass a note to the artist please. HOT HOT HOT! I personally thought the lips were perfect, pouty and HOT HOT HOT!
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
2 words nose bleed!!!
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yoshino wants Hiashi, it's as simple as that. She and Shikaku are going to have some real fun with Hiashi! So embarrassing for Neji and Shika though. I was laughing so hard when Hiashi was freaking propositioning Shikaku right there in front of God and everyone. So great. Did I mention that that picture of Shika is absolutely drool-worthy?! I stared at it for a full minute before I could even process what I was seeing. Damn, it is perfect. I can't effing wait for the next chapter!

Peace-Love-Yaoi
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Fucking. GOD! There I was, gone for four days, not able to go online and not able to look you up for any updates and here I am, back home again and what do I find?! TWO WHOLE CHAPTERS!!! *dances around here room with a maniac gleam in her eyes* And finally we see the beginnings of the dinner party. Hiashi was wonderful as always. Caring, funny, clever and a pervert ^_^
Oh boy, Neji having the jitters *lol* It's so sweet the way he is so anxious and afraid of rejection from Shikamaru's parents. And then he tries to fuck his anxiety away...and almost succeeds, too ^^ That was so hot! Poor Shikamaru. He's totally at the mercy of his Hyuuga, isn't he? But who can blame him...certainly not me *smirk* Luckily Hiashi intervened or else the Nara's might have been introduced to Neji with his pants around his ankles *evil laughter*. What a way to impress his 'mother and father in law'. Now, as always I'll be sitting right in front of computer to wait for your update! Hopefully real life won't intervene again. Otherwise tell it to shove it ^_^
person Gaia77
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must admit when I first saw the summary for Kindred I almost passed it up. Thought that it would be another story with potential that the writer would probably not finish or take forever to update...but alas the Neji/Shika pull was impossible to resist and I'm glad I caved cause I've been hooked ever since.

I absolutely love how you've portrayed every character in your stories. Your writing is fantastic.

I've been wanting to draw something in honor of these fantabulous stories for a very long time and FINALLY I'm getting somewhere!
I wanted to take the time to let you know how much I enjoy reading your stories and continue to look forward to the updates and future fics you may write. I also wanted to share a piece of the drawing I am working on. It's only Shika at the moment but Neji will join him soon enough. I hope you like and feel free to share =)

http://kyuubi1010.deviantart.com/art/Shika-105898139
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The line about Neji needing to F*** away his nerves had me peeing in my pants!
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww...Poor Neji! Shika and Hiashi are so mean to him. I guess they had to be. Can't effin' wait for the next chapter! I am really sad that this fic will be ending so soon. I feel like it has become a huge part of my life, I check it everyday and all that. What will I do without it? Cry. jk

So, is Shika smokin' hot in this chapter or is it just me? Neji too... can't leave his fine ass out!

Update soon!


Peace-Love-Yaoi