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Hehehe! XD
Neji in deed was very nervous about meeting Shika's parents!
Neji should be thabking Hiashi too, for interrupting. Smellinf like cum and other fluids doesn't make a very good first impression in front the Nara's. XDD
Ahh, all of them, dressed so well, plus tie too.
Well dressed men are sexy. :D

Mah, Tenten's baack! XD
I wonder what that thing was Hiashi had to do so.. secretly..

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!

....okay, it's official, this is my favorite chapter, because of all the lovely hiashi action in it. Mmmm. Hiashi cooking. And I like the insight into the Hyuuga history from Hiashi's point of view too. And I cannot wait until he and the elder Naras meet.....ohboyohboyohboy. *rubs hands together*

lmao!! that last chapter was so funny....neji's such a horn dog...

i love it... feed my need for neji/shika by updating!!! ^_^

mwahahahahahahahaa TENTEN. *waves newly-made HiaTen flaglet* And Hiashi being his own, sex-for-my-nephew-destroying self. Oh, too good.

It seems I’m a bit behind, lol that’s ok, gonna have to make up for that!

Review for chapter 19
Lol, maybe Neji and Shika should start their own collection, I’m sure neither would mind! Hiashi is creepy, perverted and all that other good stuff, but I love the fact that he does his best to take care of Neji. Wow…Shikamaru seems to bit more possessive and protective of Neji than I thought lol, I wonder if it will come to the point he’ll make Neji wear a collar with his name on it…and the plug with the tail!!!

Review for chapter 20
Awww Neji is nervous! It’s ok thought, I mean it’s Neji, how could anyone not love Neji! Lol I just know there are gonna be some awkward moments though before the dinner is done! Hmmm…Neji should show Shikamaru the uses of tie…like tying him to bed the bed!!! LOL Hiashi, he did it on purpose but that was probably a good thing, we couldn’t have those two coming down late to the dinner party, limping and covered in love marks, I don’t think that would be a good first impression for Shika’s parents. Update soon!!!

yess another hot, sexy visualization. this time of shikamaru
uh-oh tenten's back. i wonder what she still wants
i'm loving the plot but i have to be honest: I can't wait for more lemons
i am very much looking forward to the actual dinner party, though ^_^ i want to know what shika's dad is like =3

YES! Oh was that funny. Yay, fast updates!!! :D I like those. And Hiashi was as hysterical as always. Now what was he up to? Hmmm...

God, Hiashi just cracks me up. XD
But it seems he can be serious too. Hehe.
His and Shikamaru's talk really was good. And interesting.

''play-in-my-ass-with-a-horse-dildo-until-I’m-screaming-out-my-orgasm-at-3AM''
The mental image of that.. Ahh droolnosebleed

Heh, Can't wait till Shika's parents finally come to the dinner.
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!

I completely understand the real-life thing. I work in retail and since it's the holiday season I am always working, and even when I'm not I am sleeping.

Anyway, great job on this chapter. I love Hiashi!!! I think I say that every time he makes an appearance. You are correct that little talk was way past due. Hiashi is such a perv, I laughed at the end where he was like 'what have you been doing with your mouth Shikamaru?' Hilarious.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Peace-Love-Yaoi

*grins* I love that you update so fast. And your fascinating take on HiaTen inspired me to try my own hand at a Hiaten fic.... http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600097936

Just thought I'd drop that by.