schedule
June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! You need to continue^^ This story was a bit confusing by all of the skips and everything... Kind of like a seizure... Anyways I really enjoy it... Write more!!!!
schedule
August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!!!! Where's the rest of this wonderful story?! We need more! I loved it, and I can't wait for there to be more NaruHina. Also, although Hinata is OOC, it isn't in a bad way at all. I like the way you portray her, and I love Naruto. And one slight thing that bothers me, it's Konoha no Sato, not Saito. Sorry, I know that's annoying, but so goes the process of being a great author. Every great author needs constructive critcism. Anyway, please continue soon, I can't wait to read more.
Ja'ne!
Ja'ne!
schedule
April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome story tho i hope the naruhina develops a bit more quickly. anywho i kno u said it wont b up any time soon but i do look forward to the next chapter
schedule
April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol. What a delightfully spiteful greeting!
schedule
April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I can't wait to see what Hinata does to Sasuke, as well as see the develpment between Naruto and Hinata.
schedule
February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is such a great story... I totally can't wait for an update
schedule
January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh......YOU BASTARD!!! I WANT MOAR!! Fuck lol. so Naruto is a badass has alot of spine and can get some fucking revenge in this. HELL YEAH! Ill be back to check for updates and dude this story is epic keep it going man you got it good.
schedule
January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter
schedule
December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey that was a really weird fight sequence. It was kinda hard to understand who was doing what. And I guess Naruto is going back to Konoha and Hinata was forced to forget about him for what reason and now what is going to happen when he returns home. And he changed his appearance to go against Akatsuki.
schedule
December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very cool fic. I like how Naruto assumed the identity of Aoikaze. Makes for a cool opponent to the Akatsuki.
Also, I was wondering, how old is everyone in this fic? I'm assuming they're not the eleven or twelve they were in the canon during the battle in Wave country. Especially if Kakashi is able to confuse Naruto for Minato. Keep up the good work!
Also, I was wondering, how old is everyone in this fic? I'm assuming they're not the eleven or twelve they were in the canon during the battle in Wave country. Especially if Kakashi is able to confuse Naruto for Minato. Keep up the good work!