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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Let me start by saying how much I *love* this story. It was twisty and awesome and just made me very happy.
That said, I REALLY think the epilogue should be its own story. There's so much more that could have been done there, and even if you didn't expand, it really doesn't fit as an epilogue. It has too much of its own plot.
That said, I REALLY think the epilogue should be its own story. There's so much more that could have been done there, and even if you didn't expand, it really doesn't fit as an epilogue. It has too much of its own plot.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed this story so far, and I look forward to the epilouge. Your writing style is right up my alley, and your plot has been great. Keep up the good work.
Hoping to hear more from you in the future,
Crimson Iris
PS> The Chicagor Manual of Style is the devil, and anyone who says otherwise is a pretentious moron. Have a great day and good reading!
Hoping to hear more from you in the future,
Crimson Iris
PS> The Chicagor Manual of Style is the devil, and anyone who says otherwise is a pretentious moron. Have a great day and good reading!
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Already to the epilogue? You made Sakura so complex now. She actually fits Sasuke. I was wondering how you were gonna pull that off, but WOW. And that fight, leave it to the really sick bastards to hit you were it hurts even when dying.
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would guess that Sasukke is the only one who can relate to her. Great job. I look forward to the epilogue.
Rox
Rox
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story seriously rocks. I just spent like the past hour and a half reading through all the chapters, including your latest one! I love this story and I love the whole intrigue of Sakura and her mission! Whoever hasn't read this story DEFINITELY doesn't know what they are missing. Looking forward to an update!!!
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story. keep up the good work
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yamato, wants to help, but can't. Of course Sakura can take care of herself. In the last author note you said that your fight scenes suck. Far from it. Sakura's fight had me on the edge of my seat.
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. I can't wait til our boys show up and she's already handed the bad guys a piece of their own asses.
Rox
Rox
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, I am totally hooked now! If beta-ing chapter 7 - part 2 and chapter 8 will help it get posted quicker, you know where to find me!!!
I loved this story!!!!!!! Loved it.
I did see a few beta-worthy errors here and there, so perhaps I could be of use afterall. *pats self on the back*
I am still awaiting the final reunion with Sasuke. I love the fact that he spoke up in the hokage's office! ...that was adorable.
It's nice to see a bit of Naruto too. LOL
Looking forward to the rest!
Your newest fan,
Purvy Sage
I loved this story!!!!!!! Loved it.
I did see a few beta-worthy errors here and there, so perhaps I could be of use afterall. *pats self on the back*
I am still awaiting the final reunion with Sasuke. I love the fact that he spoke up in the hokage's office! ...that was adorable.
It's nice to see a bit of Naruto too. LOL
Looking forward to the rest!
Your newest fan,
Purvy Sage
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, if I knew how to "fav" things on this site I would fav THIS!!! I am so excited! With all I have read of your work thus far, here I am, reading an absolutely ideal storyline and delivery!! I love the italicizes inserts of Sasukes thoughts to Sakura from so many years ago... damn, shoulda just started with this one! LOL
Fantastic!!!! Enthralling actually. I am so happy to have something to really immerse myself in! Geesh.... I wonder if my beta skills will even be of use... *shrug*
Fantastic!!!! Enthralling actually. I am so happy to have something to really immerse myself in! Geesh.... I wonder if my beta skills will even be of use... *shrug*