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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn I read this first thing this morning and have finally gotten a break from work so that I can review this: this is the best shikanaru b-day fic ever. it was frickin beautiful. thanks so much for sharing.
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAHHHH!!!
*nosebleed*
a crap, all over the keyboard again...the keys are starting to stick.
still, its TOTALLY WORTH IT!!!
*death*
*nosebleed*
a crap, all over the keyboard again...the keys are starting to stick.
still, its TOTALLY WORTH IT!!!
*death*
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woots to part 2! Yatta! I luffffffssssssss Naru/Shika.. HAWT! *glomps mah lady* So yeah, that is a great way to end a perfect bday.. come home to a nekkid hottie boyfriend. Yus Yus *nods*
The smut was very very nice, and I love how Naru made sure to really prepare Shika since it had been awhile, cuz that is SO naru.. he's SO caring! He luffs his bf ^_^ And it can clearly be seen in this ^__^
the ending was really sweet, naru cleaning them both up and making a little bed under the stars for them to share. kawaii! Naru is such a sweet bf ^__^
Good job and I hope to see you writing more Nar/Shi/Nar in the future!!
Luffs Youuuu
~Me
The smut was very very nice, and I love how Naru made sure to really prepare Shika since it had been awhile, cuz that is SO naru.. he's SO caring! He luffs his bf ^_^ And it can clearly be seen in this ^__^
the ending was really sweet, naru cleaning them both up and making a little bed under the stars for them to share. kawaii! Naru is such a sweet bf ^__^
Good job and I hope to see you writing more Nar/Shi/Nar in the future!!
Luffs Youuuu
~Me
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay happy bday shika! and dood LMAO at Shadow Puppets for the Intermediate Shadow Users!! *rolls on floor laughing hysterically*
Yayness... that was just fun. I love how Chouji got him a gift certificate to the place they eat all the time.. that is so Chouji.. and lord, Ino and her DEER! lmao That would be quite the gift to receive. lol
Luffs the Uzumaki symbol on Shika's new vest.. that ROCKS! Both books in general are genius!! hehe and the necklace is sweet. The weapons are perfect. Great bday for Shika... hmm wonder how the day will end? *taps chin with finger* lol
Keep on writing! I know you're trying, just keep on! You can DO IIIIT! lol
luv u!
~Me
Yayness... that was just fun. I love how Chouji got him a gift certificate to the place they eat all the time.. that is so Chouji.. and lord, Ino and her DEER! lmao That would be quite the gift to receive. lol
Luffs the Uzumaki symbol on Shika's new vest.. that ROCKS! Both books in general are genius!! hehe and the necklace is sweet. The weapons are perfect. Great bday for Shika... hmm wonder how the day will end? *taps chin with finger* lol
Keep on writing! I know you're trying, just keep on! You can DO IIIIT! lol
luv u!
~Me
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww Shika's voice cracked. i totally want to hear that! kawaii
mmmmm nakkie naru
"Naruto chuckled in his roguishly mischievous voice" awesome line.. love that description of his voice.
"Tsunade-baa-chan threatened to knock me unconscious if I interrupted your paperwork" hahaha awesome. scary Tsunade.
i love how Shika is both softer and sweeter around naruto. it is so cute.
"Shikamaru’s hands were surprisingly active for a lazy nin. " yesssssss rockness!
*takes a break from the lemon to get a tissue* echizen ryoma! hotness. *goes back*
possessive naruto...hot.
“T-troublesome…tease!” ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh awesomeeeeeeeeeee i love that!!!!
"Normally, he was a very patient man, but everyone had their limits!"in~ne
"I don’t care how, as long as you make me come and I don’t have to do the work. It’s my birthday, after all,” classic Shika!
nyaaa dude that lemon was amazing!
“That other purple box is from you, oh person with God-awful gift-wrapping sense,” lmaoooooooo
nyaaaaaa cute ending. i love this fic.. both parts together.. totally cute.
you have the characters DOWN dude. you rock.
love you~
renaroo
mmmmm nakkie naru
"Naruto chuckled in his roguishly mischievous voice" awesome line.. love that description of his voice.
"Tsunade-baa-chan threatened to knock me unconscious if I interrupted your paperwork" hahaha awesome. scary Tsunade.
i love how Shika is both softer and sweeter around naruto. it is so cute.
"Shikamaru’s hands were surprisingly active for a lazy nin. " yesssssss rockness!
*takes a break from the lemon to get a tissue* echizen ryoma! hotness. *goes back*
possessive naruto...hot.
“T-troublesome…tease!” ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh awesomeeeeeeeeeee i love that!!!!
"Normally, he was a very patient man, but everyone had their limits!"in~ne
"I don’t care how, as long as you make me come and I don’t have to do the work. It’s my birthday, after all,” classic Shika!
nyaaa dude that lemon was amazing!
“That other purple box is from you, oh person with God-awful gift-wrapping sense,” lmaoooooooo
nyaaaaaa cute ending. i love this fic.. both parts together.. totally cute.
you have the characters DOWN dude. you rock.
love you~
renaroo
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy Happy Birthday to SHIKA!!! YAY! And yay to you for writing this! Keep going! Motto motto! I like how Shika used to have his bed under the sunroof.. that is cool and yeah... definitely would suck to have it there during the brightest hours of the day!
lmao and it's understandable for Ino not knowing what to get someone when they don't open up about themselves! So troublesome! You end up getting them the same things in just various ways.. it's all you can do without just outright getting them something they wouldn't like or wouldn't use! lol
Hmmm.. who is this mystery gifter?? >.> *giggles*
ILU!keep it coming!
~Me
lmao and it's understandable for Ino not knowing what to get someone when they don't open up about themselves! So troublesome! You end up getting them the same things in just various ways.. it's all you can do without just outright getting them something they wouldn't like or wouldn't use! lol
Hmmm.. who is this mystery gifter?? >.> *giggles*
ILU!keep it coming!
~Me
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be an adorable story with all the gifts. Will it lead to birthday party anyway??? So, Naruto is the other side to his pairing in the story. They're cute together. Is Shika the uke in this? I can't wait for the rest of this. Will this be a mulit-chapter story??? Man, so many questions sorry.:)
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very sweet! I liked it a lot and can't wait to see the second part.
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehe i love this dude!
like you didnt know this already.. i love how the gifts are all GIVEN so uniquely like their givers!
ino's gift.. omt how terrible. (as "the" shika of our group, i am appalled by ino's obvious lack of taste.)
but it is still cute of her to give him something.
Sakura being so nosey was funny too.
"This was worrisome. Not only because his hypothesis had been incorrect, but because that meant there was more than one person he knew personally in the village that would decorate a box in flashy, purple paper and flowery bows." HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!1!ONEONE
nyaaaa all these mysterious gifts.. whoever could they be from?
Chouji commenting on the vest...rock ON
HAHAHA nicaru wrote a book about shadow puppets?
so cute dude. cant wait for the next part.
<3
like you didnt know this already.. i love how the gifts are all GIVEN so uniquely like their givers!
ino's gift.. omt how terrible. (as "the" shika of our group, i am appalled by ino's obvious lack of taste.)
but it is still cute of her to give him something.
Sakura being so nosey was funny too.
"This was worrisome. Not only because his hypothesis had been incorrect, but because that meant there was more than one person he knew personally in the village that would decorate a box in flashy, purple paper and flowery bows." HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!1!ONEONE
nyaaaa all these mysterious gifts.. whoever could they be from?
Chouji commenting on the vest...rock ON
HAHAHA nicaru wrote a book about shadow puppets?
so cute dude. cant wait for the next part.
<3