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by ShiranuiV

person cynaga
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on your remission~! ♥
person Anon
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Read the first chapter a while ago. I'm glad you're back to writing, and hopefully are going to finish it.

The story has an interesting start, and you shouldn't worry about your writing, looks fine to me (I only caught a couple of mistakes and will be checking your profile to send you the corrections. They are minor so don't get all worried and stuff.)

Anyway, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. You did a very good job. ^__^

~MayaNara (who is too lazy to sign-in in order to post a review ^_^;)
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on your remission.
schedule March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say this is a wonderful start to a story, and I hope you're doing well, wherever you are. My grandfather and uncle both are struggling with cancer so I've seen some of what it's like, but I can only imagine what it must be like to actually BE the one diagnosed. I wish you all the happiness and health in the world :) Good luck!
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm praying for your remission. I survived lymphoma in 2004/2005.
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my word. I hope you get better! I love both yours and pen_name's fics (you guys have this medical collaboration, that's a ShikaNeji as well, the one you guys only update when you haven't slept in 36 hours or something - LOVED it). I'm in the medical profession (Nursing) so I like stuff that has actual fact to it, not half urban legend, half rumour. But whoa, seriously, that stinks. Take lots of vitamin C, it'll help boost your immune system (which the chemo is wrecking while attacking the tumour). And don't ignore natural remedies, even if you don't want to trust only them, they can help you at least deal with the side effects of chemo!
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well this seems like it could turn out to be quite an interesting story!
I hope you're planning on continuing it.
Really want too find out what poor Shika is going to go through xD
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahah I'm realy looking forward to the next chapter!! totaly cought my intrest!
person luna2k
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice! hope you update soon :)
person cantthnk
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good Start. Can't wait for more!