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for Caution! Slippery When Wet

by Jelp

schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story it was hot and cute at the same time, loved it!
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww. i liked it
person Kimra
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D Awesome. Well written and now I'm late for work. :P So you only get a short review. But loved reading it! :D
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please, with some switching. Equal access for Naruto!
person Raelyn
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think it was a great story and it ended wonderfully. I'd gone on longer about all the things I liked, but it's late.

As always, looking forward to anymore sasunaru that you write.
person Nanin
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Creative story.
One of those one-shots that should be remembered!

As for the ending,it's very good.
I wouldn't suggest changing it ;D