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this is good despite it sounding very summary like and a bit too detailed.you should put thought 'Blah' quotations with italics around thoughts, ~BOLD~ for Kyuubi speeking and "Blah" for normal speech. it should help with the summary like style of your fic. If you need anymore help ask around for a beta and it should help this to be an even better fic. anyways cant wait to see how sasuke reacts. update again soon.

I really love your story. I can't wait to see what comes next.

Woo, me likey! and to think, I had been growing out of the whole SasuXNaru fandom...*shrugs* oh well I do hope to read more from you soon.

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i really like this story...please continue.....i can't wait to see sasukes reaction to the baby

Well I like it, and I'd love for you to continue.

lol I liked it, I want to see what Sasuke will say, I want to know what the others will say, although I think they will all treat him as they do now, as a friend, as for Sasuke, you would think he would be happy, and most times he is, but sometimes a writer will throw in something that makes Sasuke an ass and have him reject Naru and the baby, this might be fun, having Sasu watch from afar as he watches his child grow in Naru, then to watch as his child plays happily with his father/mother while he is alone and wishing he could have them both back...oook I think I just went a bit over board lol, I like the fact that Sasu would take responsibility, so I truly hope he does, and I would hate to know he just used Naru, would break my heart, hope to read more soon, ty for the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

can't wait to see what happens next

That was a great start. Do you have plans for writting the day that Sasuke and Naruto fought? Looking forward to reading the next chapter. I was wonder if you could email me, when you next update. Thank you.