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for Three Moons Over a Round Deer

by RichardH

schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As far as you dying at childbirth Temari-chan, I think death would take one look at your spunky ass and say ‘get the fuck back there,’

EPIC WIN for dialogue, lol! And I read +3 a while ago! It was such a HAWT doujin! My favorite part is when he and Temari are about to do it and Shika's like, "If the probabilty of A is greater than B, then C..." XD I was like, that is SUCH a Shika moment!
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I like it. I like it a lot! Great work!
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love love love love the second chapter. *Grins*
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is GREAT. I mean, it's funny, no one is OOC, and I just <3 it!!!! Keep up the GREAT work! (PS: The title of the second chapter: XD funny as hell!)