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for Payback is a Bastard

by lexjamandme

person lara5170
schedule September 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very fluffy and very good. I could almost picture the actual 'picture' that was described with the Princess on the ground and Sasuke attacking the Prince.
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love your fluffy heart!!!!!!!!!!! kawai!!!!!!!!! thank you thank you thank you!!! i cant take all this angsty ness blech lol and i woves your sense of humore she fluttered her fake eyelashes so hard they caused a change in the wind current lol hehehehe and i wanna picture too!!!
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...Oh, how I love your fluffy little heart. You write the sweetest stories ever.
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love every story of yours that I read...but this one...I don't think I've ever laughed out loud before! Oh my goodness, the mirth!!! It was so wonderful! I could chalk it up to it being 8 am and having not slept for 36 hours, but I think I'll blame it on the story. It's a small world aaaaafffterall!
person Lee
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This one was really good (and I don't just mean the lemon ;D ). Based on this and some of your other fics, I like your style of writing and look forward to seeing more submissions from you.
person Yuri
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um...Can i say tht this is the hottest, sexiest and cutest story i have ever read. Never mind the stupid rides...although i would love to see Sasuke trying to mentally kill himself...but my god the sex afterward was amazing! I think i need a very cold shower now.
person sameyler
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg that was so awsome, funny sweet and hot.lol
person Lechan
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great one-shot. it made me grin a sqirm and well, it was grea. I have to say the best part was the "Its a small world" part. I was crying picturing Sasuke ready to attempt drowning himself or naruto in two feet of water, and then when Naruto snuggled him and Said I love yoU... ^-^ Sasuke's reaction just made me melt. I love your writing style because of its fluffy/hot/funniness so thanks for writing this. I always look for your stuff and it gives me inspiraion to rite my own. ^-^ Loved it.

schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe Disneyland..man I'm so with Naruto on that front. My bf is scared of me at disneyland, and my best friend say's i should be like the childern that wear little blue leashs! lol anyway...i'm going soon and this story just hyped me up even more! hehe your the best for writing about disneyland and making it three times better with sasunaru smut!
person Avonne
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, you are SO awesome!

My teeth are rotting from the fluff, but it's the best excuse i could imagine going to my dentist with!! And i liked the whole amusement park idea, i cracked up at the end with the image of sasuke getting soak and wet on a water ride and Naruto being perfectly dry. I bet his face getting off the ride was just so...Sasuke!

Another lovely story for the books, mich!! How i love my boys in so much love!! Thanks for sharing!!