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for Payback is a Bastard

by lexjamandme

person Nanin
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice one-shot n_n
It was very sexy and at the same time very cute.
Made my day!
person Raelyn
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nosebleed? What nosebleed? Oh, that! Well, um...

So! The pearly gates of hell with sunshine and laughter all day long...I didn't know Naruto was so into Uchiha-torture.

As always, wonderful story. It's always a pleasure seeing that you've updated or added something, cause I know we're in for a treat. Looking forward to more!

PS: Those pajama pants are just perfect for the both of them.
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say you are the Quentin Tarantino of SasuNaru Fanfiction. KUDOS!
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So cute and absolutely beautiful! The picture you presented us with Naruto and Sasuke watching the fireworks together in their room was abslutely stunning.

I loved the smex it was definitely hott just as in all your other stories. This one-shot was perfect and made my day completely. I loved it, absoutely loved it.
person Jelp
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D That was very fluffy, but still very hot. You're very talented in that you can blend the two without making it seem forced or out of character! ^_^

I don't know what else to really say becasue I think I've already told you how awesome and amazing authoress you are (alliteration baby!), but I'll tell you again just in case you've forgotten. You are an awesome and amazing authoress!

Looking forward to what you post next! ~ Jelp
person Word_Slave
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this from the very beginning!!! You know I did. I love you and everything you write... fluffy or non.
Slave
Kisses baby
person Anon
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another amazingly well written story by you. I love everything you write. Each new SasuNaru story you create makes me fall in love with SasuNaru all over again. I like how you go back and forth between the past and the present, it's like your signature as an Author, along with your remarkable humor and juicy SasuNaru lemons, what else could i ask for? You deliver it all and never disappoint your loyal readers.

I have It's a Small World stuck in my head now but it's okay because now whenever i hear that song, i'll remember your story and i like that :D

'Later, they would collect the picture that captured the Princess lying on the ground in a lacy heap, having fallen when Sasuke ripped his arm away, Prince Charming cradling his gloved hand against his chest, a pained expression on his face, and Sasuke yanking a red faced, stammering Naruto away from the whole scene'


That has to be ONE of my favorite parts of the story, although it's really hard to choose a favorite part when the entire story is awesome.
person Anon
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how you go back and forth between the past and the present, it's like your signature as an Author, along with your remarkable humor and juicy SasuNaru lemons, what else could i ask for?

Oh! I forgot to mention your fluffy endings...i LOVE them. I hope you always write stories with fluffy, tender moments as i've learned to eagerly look forward to all of them.
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loooooooooooovvvvvvvveeeeed it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I especially loved the bit when Sasuke says Naruto is bueatiful. Made me weep LOL. Good Job!
person Magical_Reality
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh. I really loved his one-shot. So adorable. I'm such a fan of yours, and I wasn't expecting anything less than perfect from you. Keep up the good work!