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by MissB

schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really well done. I love it.
person m.z
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think the way you managed to convey sakura's internal pain through your writing is truly tanlented!! beautifully potent.....love your rendition of this couple!!!

please write more if you ever get more inspiration!!!
person LadyNorth76
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue this fanfic. You shouldn't end it there.
person Ev
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Definitely causes an Ache - I kno the feeling personally. Not a good feeling, let me tell you..

Great job, Loved it!
person 2goodbyegirl2
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME.
SO amazingly written.

Continue it? I have an idea.. Maybe the next installment could be a moment of public affection: like Sakura healing an injury of Sasuke. She would do this in front of Naruto or Kakashi or both. O_0 haha I don't know.
You could make it a very sexual moment. ;)

Well done.
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff. Incredibly sexy yet filled with good emotion. Please continue.
person ninjakitty
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What would he do if she fell pregnant?

Nice story. Very well written.
person roxnroll
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. I would love to read more. Maybe another chapter.
Rox
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was so intense and sad! I loved it, it's really worth reading it :) I'd love a sequel though :D It really must mean something for Sasuke if he never went with another woman and stayed with Sakura.
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good warm up. keep up the good work.