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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I kind of feel so bad for Sakura, but the ending was funny.
It was a good portrayal of them. Way believable.
It was a good portrayal of them. Way believable.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Definitely one of the most entertaining NaruSasu fics to come in awhile. It's ridiculous that no one is reading it.
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAH! I had NO idea that you had a sequel to this *______*
After reading your amazing fic Into the Mountains and Unlike Dancing at FF.Net I fell madly truly deeply for your writing. I didn't realize until reading The Hunting Ground that you were an author here (I don't visit AFF often) Had I read this sequel the day I read Unlike Dancing I think my brain would have exploded. You wrote my #1 favorite SasuNaruSasu naughty scene--Sasuke Naruto using a random female (NOT Sakura) as a conduit for their sexual attraction towards another. *dies* Seriously... this fic made my stomach flutter--really. And you transformed the Sasuke who was so tragically hot when he pushed Naruto away in the alley in 'UD' and called him an idiot to one of the sexiest darkest most Sasuke's I've ever read. My favorite aspect of his character is that he really is running prostitution in his brother's strip joint... how DARK is that! That gives him so many shades of bad boy coloring that when he cruelly pushes the prostitute dancer on her knees and tells her to show Naruto how it's done I bloody near squealed in evil yaoi fangirl glee.
I LOVE your writing so much and am sooo happy to found more of your stories here, Ljiljana/Cupricanka. Thank you for sharing!
After reading your amazing fic Into the Mountains and Unlike Dancing at FF.Net I fell madly truly deeply for your writing. I didn't realize until reading The Hunting Ground that you were an author here (I don't visit AFF often) Had I read this sequel the day I read Unlike Dancing I think my brain would have exploded. You wrote my #1 favorite SasuNaruSasu naughty scene--Sasuke Naruto using a random female (NOT Sakura) as a conduit for their sexual attraction towards another. *dies* Seriously... this fic made my stomach flutter--really. And you transformed the Sasuke who was so tragically hot when he pushed Naruto away in the alley in 'UD' and called him an idiot to one of the sexiest darkest most Sasuke's I've ever read. My favorite aspect of his character is that he really is running prostitution in his brother's strip joint... how DARK is that! That gives him so many shades of bad boy coloring that when he cruelly pushes the prostitute dancer on her knees and tells her to show Naruto how it's done I bloody near squealed in evil yaoi fangirl glee.
I LOVE your writing so much and am sooo happy to found more of your stories here, Ljiljana/Cupricanka. Thank you for sharing!
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is made of win. Even better than Unlike Dancing (which I do like, by the way; I like all of your work).
I can hardly wait for the sequel.
I can hardly wait for the sequel.
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off, it was really hot.
I love how you write because you are able to draw a picture in my mind.
Second, I laughed my ass off at- "Is it because of my mother?" XD
I love how you write because you are able to draw a picture in my mind.
Second, I laughed my ass off at- "Is it because of my mother?" XD
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aw, cliffhanger...
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like you, you write awesome stories. :D
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really, really liked this series. I love the way Sasuke is willing to put up with some of Naruto's crap, but he keeps pushing the boundary, and then finally, he let's Naruto know that it's time. I love Naruto's confusion and want, and I thought this was really well-written. Great job.
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I see where you simplified it a bit and I'm still in love with this piece. I especially love the addtions to the lapdance with Sasuke watching. Amazing. Keep the hot stuff coming!