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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this. I'm not usually one for alternate universe stories but I really like this one. Very innovative and you're developing the relationships between the characters like a pro. Please update this!!!
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
off to a great start here. looking forward to more
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Everyone is finally coming together!
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter!
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! I'm so glad you finally updated! I really like this story. You make sasuke's discomfort seem so tangible. It's really uncomfortable to read those parts, which i think is great. Sasuke has never been my favorite character in any story, but his parts are the most striking. I really enjoy reading about shika and naruto, though. I like naruto's "hand power" hehe Can't wait for the threesome! That is if you're still planning on writing such a situation?
Thanks for the Story!!
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Thanks for the Story!!
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story :) I love your Naruto and I can't wait to see what he will do next or would he met his mother ? :) I hope, you'll write next chapter soon, and thank you for that story :)
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Love your fic, it really has a plot, not just a excuse for smut, wich happens a lot and I am so envolved with the storie. I have some teories abou what seems most evident though I am a little puzlled about other, like why ghost appear to Sasuke in a much more gruesome way than to Shikamaru. What else has Naruto sensibility inform? Minato was a detective and Itachi and Sasuke's dad are cops so I imagine some relation beteween them. Can't wait to read more! I am really loving your fic!
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wo~ot!! So glad you've been working on this again. It seemed like forever since the last time you worked on it (not that I have any room to talk ^^;;)
The opener was fun... in a weird, gross, fun way XD I feel SO bad for Sasu, but you definitely torment him well. I'd probably feel worse if it was Naru, so I guess better Sasu then?? *cough*
I like the way you went with his interaction with his Uncle this time around. Makes you feel sad for him too, with him apparently trying to tell Sasu his Aunt was in trouble.
Shika didn't get much play in this chap, but it was cute, him looking all around for Minato and coming to a somewhat conclusion about his relation with Naruto. Can't wait to see more of him in the next chap!
Naru/Saku banter is fun ^_^ Definitely two best friends. how Sakura is still on her diet cuz she didn't order the fries XDDD Oh Sai... lol
During Sasuke's time at work, that was a really down moment too. Him getting his call from his Aunt. You can just imagine how he felt and looked. Then Naru showing up and scaring the living daylights out of him and Naru being completely oblivious and Naru and his one-track mind! MANGAMANGAMANGA! lol
Glad Naru took the initiative to take Sasu to see his aunt ♥ Things are moving along quite nicely!
Is the next chap ready for beta'ing???? HURRRRRY!!!
♥ya!
The opener was fun... in a weird, gross, fun way XD I feel SO bad for Sasu, but you definitely torment him well. I'd probably feel worse if it was Naru, so I guess better Sasu then?? *cough*
I like the way you went with his interaction with his Uncle this time around. Makes you feel sad for him too, with him apparently trying to tell Sasu his Aunt was in trouble.
Shika didn't get much play in this chap, but it was cute, him looking all around for Minato and coming to a somewhat conclusion about his relation with Naruto. Can't wait to see more of him in the next chap!
Naru/Saku banter is fun ^_^ Definitely two best friends. how Sakura is still on her diet cuz she didn't order the fries XDDD Oh Sai... lol
During Sasuke's time at work, that was a really down moment too. Him getting his call from his Aunt. You can just imagine how he felt and looked. Then Naru showing up and scaring the living daylights out of him and Naru being completely oblivious and Naru and his one-track mind! MANGAMANGAMANGA! lol
Glad Naru took the initiative to take Sasu to see his aunt ♥ Things are moving along quite nicely!
Is the next chap ready for beta'ing???? HURRRRRY!!!
♥ya!
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! I just read the first chapter but am totaly hooked already! Love it! The misterie, the supernatural, the characters... It will be hard to concentrate on work now...
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay!!! (Yes, this story warrants three exclamation points it's that awesome) You're continuing! I love this story, for reals. I can't wait to see all three boys interacting now. And ahaha, poor Sasuke XD. That he hasn't dead fainted every time is amazing. And his poor uncle ;.;. He's sorry that you have the misfortune of getting none of the nice bits of ghosts like Shika (I still find it amusing that Shika would have just had a lovely chat with him and asked for tea he couldn't drink before calmly explaining what's wrong). Awww, he was probably trying to tell him about his aunt.
And poor Naruto XD. It sucks to be a daddy almost clone XD. All the hot guys you meet keep thinking you're a ghost and staring at you in suspicion or flipping out, crouching and huddling up in corners like frightened kittens. I can't wait for the next chapter~!
And poor Naruto XD. It sucks to be a daddy almost clone XD. All the hot guys you meet keep thinking you're a ghost and staring at you in suspicion or flipping out, crouching and huddling up in corners like frightened kittens. I can't wait for the next chapter~!