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for The Writing on the Wall

by ladygizarme

person inuspike
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Yay! I had almost forgotten this story and when I saw it on the front page I was super excited. So much suspense, so much drama, so much ESP going off. ^^ Can't wait to see what you have in mind for the boys. And, please I beg of you, be nice to Itachi. *holds out hands pleadingly* Pretty please??
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back.
person dragon
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person Kitty
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until the next chapter, things are really going to start to get interesting now.
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy to know you haven't given up on this story.
person PhantasumFantasy
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
^.^ Please keep up the good work! I love the story you've created...can't wait for the next chapter to come! I want to know how Shika's going to react lol!
person Amelia
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, completely keeping me guessing! And the characters are all so wonderfully in, well, character. My one criticism is you should work on the principle of "show not tell." For example, when you just told the reader that Sakura was a nurse working to pay for medical school, you could have just showed us that through the story.

I would like to join your mailing list for updates!

Thanks,
Amelia
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm really enjoying this and I cant wait for more, i read all of your chapters in a few hours :) Very nice plot.
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooo Naru's dad? *snickers* poor Sasu being tormented by Naru and his 'ghost counter part' gotta feel sorry for him. Hmmm though the way his dead uncle's ghost is almost makes it seem like he was murdered or somethin. Hmm eitehr way interesting so far how to see more :)
person Tsuki Akuma
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would absolutely love it if you could e-mail me when you update. It's not often I find an awesome story like this on AFF, and this is actually the first time I've reviewed on here. I only review on FF, since I only have an account there, but I felt like I just HAD to be added to your update list (otherwise I would have saved this somewhere and then forgotten about it, only coming back to it months and months later).

My e-mail is rinxandxkinx12@aim.com (dificult, I know D:).

Thank you,
Tsuki