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for The Writing on the Wall

by ladygizarme

person blisblop
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've always thought this couple balanced well.Fine, fine scene here,I'm seeing this like a movie but better.thats why we read no?Hawt and smart.
person Mina
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If I was Sasuke, I would be crying everyday. No seriously. That or like.... attached to someone near to me. I would become an entity that lives glued to Shikamaru's arm, and when I need to go somewhere else and Shika needs to go some place different, much like a hermit crab finding another shell, I would find another body to be latched to and go.

But, yes. I love this story, even if I may get NIGHTMARES, OMG WTF IS THAT THING IN SASUKE'S APARTMENT D8!?
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. Honestly, if I were you I'd attempt to get this published... hopefully you'll end up as lucky as Shika.

Mind you'd have to change the character names.
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha.. awesome!! I was always just assuming that the ghost was Deidera, what with the criminal record or what not. I never assumed it to be Minato! >:D (Note: I still could be wrong. ^^)


Keep up the great work!
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yep yep yep! Very very interseting... Is it Naruto's father? (I'm asking this as I think 'well... obviously...')
Thanks!
-smelly
person gilliath
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aha! I think I see what's going on here! Amazing:D
person 7mizu8
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! they finally meet!
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
hmm I think I know what's going on but i'll just have to wait and see if I'm correct. I'm excited
thanks for the awesome story ^_^
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schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter... although I was a bit confused at the end there when Itachi scared Sasuke. Was it still part of the dream or did Itachi really go all Temple of Doom on him? (lol Indiana Jones reference for the win!)

Keep up the great work. I always enjoy reading this. ^^
person Dragon7
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
person Houseki
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nyaaaaaaaaa Sasukeeee!!!! He hurt himself! *cries* He srsly like, just needs to um... not move, ever. That fall could not have felt good -____- What's this? Why is his uncle calling his aunt's name?? Hmmmmm???? Odd... and how perceptive of his ma... he is her lil boy after allllll ^__^

Yay Naru and Saku!! Sakura definitely has patience for Naruto... one would after all those yrs knowing each other. Cute how she is so medically incline that everything she does is related to it.. funneh! And yeah.. I can totally understand Naru's need to not want to go back to something so mundane as reading story after story after story... especially if most are BORING!! or AWFUL!! or WHATEVER!! >.>

And then.... SHIKA!!!!!!!! He gets to meet Naruuuuu orrrrrrr the ghost? WTF?! OMG?! AHHH! *ahem* Well, that was a very rude way to greet his new editor.. but I'm sure he'll make up for it later on, ne? Ne?! teehee

LOVE IT! YOU KNOW IT!! Keep it up tomotan! Love ya!

Me