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YaY am so excited for the newwwwww chapter! The plot is thickening!!! I can't wait till what I think is going to happen happens xDDDD But if it doesn't I will be pleasantly surprised!

I'm confused.

Very nice! This is just spellbinding, I can't wait for more!

Vashta

Ahhh! I absolutely love this story! It's amazing! I can't wait to see what happens next. I have so many questions! Will Sasuke ever tell Shikamaru that he sees ghosts? What will happen when Sasuke sees Naruto again? What's with the dead ghost that looks like Naruto? How will Shikamaru react when he sees Naruto and notices that he looks like the ghost? Howcome the ghost felt like he knew Sasuke from before?? What is going to happen???? Haha ^_^;; This story has a fabulous plotline, and the characterizations are great too. I love how you've kept with the Naruto storyline somewhat, by making Tsunade the publisher and a gambler, and having the council involved. Basically I just love everything about this story ^_^ Please update soon, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.

OMG XD

im confuseddd :( but i really love this >< poor sasuke. UPDATE SOON!

Shika would at least venture to say he hadn’t seen a ghost look so traumatized since his father had walked through that little girl when he was a child.
i would think having someone walk through you..WOULD be traumatizing.
someone he used to know? oooooooooh! awesomeness!
nyaaaa sweet dream dude.. that would scare the ultrapiss outta me..
awwwwww poor sasuke is so confused.. *wipes the dripping sarcasm out of my voice* but really *cough*
Or, in his case, someone who liked looking their best—and that included avoiding the public humiliation of having a panic attack in an open gym.
"your so vain...i bet you think this fic is about you..."
its hilarious, i cannot see sasuke lifting weights.. it actually cracks me UP...Scrawny McScrawnerton of Scrawnyville Ohio..
mmmmmmm Itachi cop.... coptachi....hotness.
wooooooooooot i love the sasuke ghost visits.. they are so graphic and scary
That smell of death and decay; that taste of blood and rot; that wet, rattling sound of bloody lungs desperately trying to squeeze every last drop of air out of and into their starving alveoli.
awesome line dude...
its funny, cause i was thinking "he remembered to grab his wallet?" while sasu was in the 7-11...and then you said that he didnt. woot for details.
*giggles at Tsunade's prowess*
Danzou...bastard.
Yosh!!! they are gonna publish Shika's story wooooot!
naruto is going to handle shika huh? *smirk* hot.
that is freakin awesome dude.
*has a hard time imagining a bubbly shikamaru*
ITACHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII yatta!!!! *heartyheart*
omt awesome ending! dude.. sweet. i loved it. i had to read the last part over and over just to get the whole effect.
itachi.. awesome.
i CANT WAIT for the next chapter!!! hurry up and write the damn thing...with more scaretachi onegai.
love love
ren

Poor Sasuke again. He goes from seeing an actual human to seeing a ghost and not knowing there was a difference.
I'm happy Naruto got Shikamaru's manuscript looked at by Tsunade.
I can't wait until they get together.
I kind of wish that Sasuke and Shikamaru would just realize how they feel (and then admit it).

I'm so excited when I see this story is updated. I can't wait for the next chapter.

This is an excellent story! I'd love to have you inform when you update -> montanawildhack@2die4.com

Your writing style is clear but descriptive and the story line is very intriguing!

Poor Sasuke, he's really getting freaked. I can understand why though, feeling ghosts is more than scary enough for me at times. But I do keep wondering why the heck Sasuke gets all the scary ones, and Shika only gets the nice ones?