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ohhhhhh pooooooor blond dead guy! he was srsly shaken up! nande nande?! love that even shika is a bit alarmed at this turn of events. speaking of shika.. woohoo on getting published! and, gotta love that he realized after getting off the phone with naru that HE should be the one getting excited, not the editor :p

speaking of naru... LOVE him and tsunade together! omg tsunade had me crackin up with the whole 'dating' thing lmao.. gah old farts getting in the way of things even at the Leaf?! *sigh* Tsunade, pound them in the ground! ^__^ But yeah, oh and then Naru FORGETTING the damn 'script *rolls eyes* VERY naru btw ^__^ lol

and then, me... i mean, Sasuke. He pulled the short-stick, didn't he? Guy has got the WORST of this whole thing! I mean, I don't mind all the screen time he's getting, but, he's about to have himself a damn coronary at this rate! First having the nightmare about naruto.. or the ghost.. and then having that bloody gory thing at his bathroom door.. then wtf was up with itachi?! Aiyaa! I liked the mangenkyou mind-set you gave with the dream. Very cool... the green threw me off, until it hit me you are going in negative.. suppose that's why nya? lol and what about his dad and ma and aunt and hmmmmmm yus yus I see now, yus I believe I see your madness finally. nfufufu

Ya... so... I luvs it. You know I do ^__^ This whole idea was fun and crazy and I is happy to be apart of it and along for the ride ^__^

Big hugs and kisses yo!!

Me

eh??? are you saying Naru-chan died?! Noooo!!

This was a really good chapter and I really enjoyed it. I just love how Naruto and Sasuke met. Although, Sasuke's unsuccessful chase after the blond was kind of creepy. I wonder what it means that his hand went through him and that he had a vision of the blond all bloody and dead. Perhaps, unlike Shikamaru, maybe Sasuke isn't seeing actual ghosts at all!! Maybe he's just freaking crazy and needs some medication to take care of his Schizophrenia. O_O


Keep up the good work! ^^

Yay! A new chappeh!! Nya! You know I'm totally digging this cuz a lot has to do with my dear Sasukun and all... but it huuuuuuurrrrrrts to see him being tortured the whole damn time! lol Him finding Shika's note.. and starting to *feel* things for Shika is really cute! Aww and MUCH LOVE to shika, cuz shika is SUCH a good guy, leaving pain meds and making sure Sasukun's cell is nearby. But AIYAA! What's this? Blood on the wall? Are ghosts leaving premonitions for Sasukun now? Hmm *rubs chin* ***hides behind hands and laughs maniacally*** *ahem* Annnnnnyways! Poor kid... scared to go HOME! Home is supposed to be a safe haven! But.. seems SHIKA is Sasukun's safe-place ^__^ teehee!! *wonders where creepy dead guy went since he's been mia now for over a week *rubs chin**

Nyaaaa NARUTOOOO!! *luvs* I so can't wait to see how Neji reacts when Naru gets his way about Shika's story teehee! Ohh and the *so* not a squeak from Naru was QOOT!! >.> *ahem* Bloody 'ell Sasukun! That's NOT how we pick up major hot blonde babes! Do NOT make fun of them!! *sigh* silly sasukun *shakes head* Mmmm I srsly want hot chocolate now from Borders!! Nya!! lol *thinks about heading up there sunday when i go get mice from Matt's shop >.>*

and omg... naru? dead naru? Not naru? omg! WTF?! wtf are you dooooooooooing? (ahem teehee) and the death note thing.. wow... again, premonitions for sasukun? mannnnnn poor kid can't catch a damn BREAK! *sigh* hope things will eventually brighten up for my sasukun cuz he can't be picked on ALL the time, right? RIGHT?!

anyways love, great job! can't wait to see the next chappeh! and can't wait for naru's bday! and awesome job at the scav hunt tonight! You and Zack KICKED ASS!! lol Srsly will have to separate you two next week teehee!

*wonders if you even made it to bed after we said night... well, *I* said night, so you're prolly asleep on the couch at your comp or something teehee silly!!*

Love you!

Me

Very interesting.

Woooot another chapter! Yosh!
Ok, so boy howdy do I know what it is like to have to close one day and go in and open the next. Blehhhh. Poor shika.
he wouldn’t do something as audacious as resetting Shikamaru’s alarm for himself hate Sasuke… love this line… it is kinda cute.
Nyaaaaaaaaaa shika is so thoughtful *heartyheart* how cute!!!
Sasuke stubble huh? Sastubble.. bleh.
Sasuke getting ready..such a primper. I swear.. make sure every single spike is in order Sasuke-chan… *grr* well.. whatever.
Nyaaa so close to seeing Itachi! Not fair!!!! Call him Sasuke.. call him!
The “skater kid” *giggggglezzzz*
Neeeeji….* shivers with happiness*
Spirit Detective? How cuteness! YuYu ref?
how could the guy even see?), hehehehe… ohhh Naruto… if you only knew.
I love neji’s dickdom..it is supremely awesome…
HAHAHA I read on and it WAS yuyu ref… lmao woot
Neji smiled at him; a dangerous smile. “Don’t touch my cocoa again if you want to keep your manhood intact.” HAHAHAHAHAHA yosh!
I love Temari and Naruto’s interactions.. she is cute the way you write her.
Hey..not just 12 year olds read manga Sasuke.. you snarky bastard.
Hehehehe insulting comes naturally to Sasuke to Naruto. Hmmm wonder why.
Ohhhh Sasuke saw the blonde ghost! Mmmm awesome!! I cant wait for the next chapter dude!
I love this story.. I really like it a lot.. so hurry up and write more
wooot woot!
love ya
ren

This is outstanding! You've got me on the edge of my seat. My son reads Deathnote, I'll have to try it noe. Thanks! UNIQUE for aff.

I'm so excited. I have a hunch that I know where all of this is going and I want to ask so bad, but if I'm right I don't want to spoil it for anyone else, I also don't want to know if I'm right! Does that make sense? ANYWHO! I'm just tickled to death with your characterization, I can see the scenes play out in my mind and picture the facial expressions. Great job!

Vashta

wooot to another chapter. sorry this took so long to get to.. busy weekend... like i would put it off intentionally.
ok.. first.. cute that you have sasuke closing... and making sure things were done properly.
VERY cute that he wanted to sit by shika. even though i hate him... i like how you write him.
ouuuch! gtting hit by a car isnt cool....or should i say HITTING a car isnt cool.
His aunt watching Larry King is awesome.. LK is like.. news gold.
i love the scene of him getting home and finding the ghost in his apartment and then running. it has a very good description to it..
it really makes me feel.. kinda scared with him... it has a good frantic feel to it.
i very like the 'casual' way of sasuke and shikamaru's non-ship.. very cool... and very them i think.
i think shika is a very comforting person, even if he doesnt mean to be...he is just so calm and good to be around. My opinion of course, but as i "am" shika.. i should know.
i want to know what number shika is on sasuke's cell...
i love shika's intraction with the blonde ghost. its....cute to me.
Shikamaru supposed, for a ghost, memory was all they really had left. awwwwww
wooot!! shika was doing evps!!
“Yeah, Sasuke, I said yes. Don’t be troublesome, just get over here. How far are you?” dont be troublesome indeed... (my favorite line so far...dont be troublesome)
sasukes questions about the liquor are very like you... i cant explain why, they just are.
hahahahahaha they are watching my channel!!! wooot
“Maybe you should slow down, Sasuke. It would be troublesome if you puked in my place.”

His words were met with a dark glare that clearly said, “As if I would puke.”

i love both of these lines. shika is soooo funny and straight forward.. and sasuke is sooooo vain even in his current state. awesome
you write a good drunk sasuke. i enjoy that *laugh*
He wanted to imprint himself with it from the inside out, to keep Shikamaru with him like a talisman against the horrors he faced seemingly everywhere but here second favorite line. i like to think of shika as a talisman.
extremely hot and frantic lemon dude. mmm sexy beasts.. well... shika anyway.. and i suppose a drunken sasuke isnt all bad...

i guess

so anyways... i cant wait for the next chapter! maybe i will be around to help beta it ne? hmmmove
love and kisses lovie
-ren

Wow. That was a hell of a lemon!! O_O


I can't wait for the scene where Sasuke discovers Shikamaru has the same ability as him. Although its a mystery why the ghosts keep attacking Sasuke. Heh, I was half expecting Shaka's civil ghost to flip out and go after Sasuke, only to have Shika remark later on in an afterthough about how troubling it its that now he'll never get the end of his story. hehehehe

Keep up the good work!