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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really liking this story! But I can't wait to have naruto meet them!!!
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Smut! I like the descriptive words you used when talking about appearance and detailing the lemon, I have a tough time with lemons. I can see it happening in my mind, but I rush when putting it down, OH WELL! You're a great writer and this story is exactly what I wanted when I issued my challenge, thanks!
Vashta
Vashta
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg I am so loving this. You have got to update soon. DONT LEAVE THIS HANGIN!!! Please update soon and keep up the great work.
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh...I like it. Please continue. ^^
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHOAMG! Sasu's uncle chasing him around the parking lot-how horrific! And then getting run over by his AUNT! (not really run over, but.. ya know :P) Poor guy! Then having to walk into his apt to see creepy stalker ghost.. gah! GTFO! (get the fuck out!) I'd run to the closest person i knew as well... and if it was shika.. then hellz yeah i'd run to him for some comfort teehee
luv shika's part.. he's just so.. laid back ^__^ and his ghost is so fun? lol he's cool ^__^
and wooooooooooots on the LEMON!!!! quite hawt mah derr! that's the way to truly get comforted teehee! i luv needy sasuke.. i just luv sasuke right now too so that really makes me feel bad for him lol
motto motto! onegai? ^__^
ashiteru!!!!!!
Me
luv shika's part.. he's just so.. laid back ^__^ and his ghost is so fun? lol he's cool ^__^
and wooooooooooots on the LEMON!!!! quite hawt mah derr! that's the way to truly get comforted teehee! i luv needy sasuke.. i just luv sasuke right now too so that really makes me feel bad for him lol
motto motto! onegai? ^__^
ashiteru!!!!!!
Me
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ShikaSasu, huh? That's a new one for me.
I have kids, too, so I certainly empathize.
This is an interesting beginning. I'm trying to figure out who the blond ghost is! And when the ShikaNaruSasu finally happens, count me in the front row.
I have kids, too, so I certainly empathize.
This is an interesting beginning. I'm trying to figure out who the blond ghost is! And when the ShikaNaruSasu finally happens, count me in the front row.
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke. I feel bad for him having to see the 'bad' ghosts all the time.
It can be frightening enough just to see a 'good' ghost.
It sounds to me like both of them want a real relationship, but are afraid of ruining the friendship.
At least Shikamaru can give Sasuke some kind of relief. It would suck to be living in fear all the time.
I feel bad that Sasuke got hit by Aunt, even if it was only a glancing blow.
*waiting patiently*
It can be frightening enough just to see a 'good' ghost.
It sounds to me like both of them want a real relationship, but are afraid of ruining the friendship.
At least Shikamaru can give Sasuke some kind of relief. It would suck to be living in fear all the time.
I feel bad that Sasuke got hit by Aunt, even if it was only a glancing blow.
*waiting patiently*
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Continue! definately definatly continue! is naruto an empath? cool! nyah; your writting style is good; but a bit long winded, i did like it though. please update as soon as you can! ^--^
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woots! you finally got it up! *has been waiting since the day we discussed all the plot details!* Hmmmmmmmm how WILL all three get together??? Hmmmmmmm >.> teehee i LUVS all threeeeeeeeeee and toss in some gaara and then i'd luvs all fourrrrrrrrrrrrrrrs of them! but, gaara is a baby in this >.> *ahem* but yeah.. lmao I'm tired so this will be crack, btw ^__^
Pooooooooooooooooooooooooooooor Sasuke! I absolutely fucking LUV sasuke right now, so i am on his side atm and he is being played with cruelly by our devious minds.. *ahem* poor kid. *sigh* all will get better soon, nya! but yeah if that was MY affinity, I'd be fucking walking around with my god damn eyes sealed SHUT! haha can't wait to hear more details about his therapist and how he acts at work and hmmmm how he will be able to have a normal life.. ever! with being haunted by crazy dead ghosts!
Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiika! I LUVS too! Cuz he is my sexy-shadow-shinobi.. i mean, writer. so yeah... glad he has come to terms to his ability of seeing ghosts and communicating. at least his ghosts are friendly... kind of like Casper >.> *ahem* who is this ghost btw? *ahem* *ahem* *giggles* poor thing always having to touch kids to make sure they were of the solid kind >.> *ahem* bet he got looked at weird too by the kids with him touching them >.> *shrugs* maybe... kids do touch so *shrugs*
Naaaaaaaaaaruuutoooooo!!!!!!!! *ahem* I LUVS him toooooo! Cuz he's naru and I ADORE older Naru..cuz well, he's older *ahem* wtf is with my "*ahem*"s tonight?! *sleeeeeepy* But yeah, so looks like he's got himself a fun place of employment! I'd love to work at a place like that. How bout me, you, and ren start up our own publishing co? teehee Of course it would have the same name as this cuz it rocks! woots for ren on that one! i was close to it.. some reason "leaf through" came to my mind first *shrugs* lol aiyaa what will happen when Neji realizes he's missing one of his packets of cocoa?!!!! DOOOOOOOOOM that is what will happen!! MUCH DOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!! scarreh. Temari Temari Me? Temari.. can't wait to see her story.. what is this "sadness" she holds? hmmmmmmmm? But yeah... ooh can't wait to see Tsunade and Naru interact. Cuz they are always fun. Cute that Tem's gf like's Jiraiya.. teehee... perv!
Mmm yups so can't wait to see that next chap.. well, the last like 1/2 cuz i've read what you have thus far already teehee!
Anyways, must work this one to the bone (aka to the end) so that way you can get back and work on SMFO and your inu fics and all those other great ones ^__~
Much luv sista!
Me
Pooooooooooooooooooooooooooooor Sasuke! I absolutely fucking LUV sasuke right now, so i am on his side atm and he is being played with cruelly by our devious minds.. *ahem* poor kid. *sigh* all will get better soon, nya! but yeah if that was MY affinity, I'd be fucking walking around with my god damn eyes sealed SHUT! haha can't wait to hear more details about his therapist and how he acts at work and hmmmm how he will be able to have a normal life.. ever! with being haunted by crazy dead ghosts!
Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiika! I LUVS too! Cuz he is my sexy-shadow-shinobi.. i mean, writer. so yeah... glad he has come to terms to his ability of seeing ghosts and communicating. at least his ghosts are friendly... kind of like Casper >.> *ahem* who is this ghost btw? *ahem* *ahem* *giggles* poor thing always having to touch kids to make sure they were of the solid kind >.> *ahem* bet he got looked at weird too by the kids with him touching them >.> *shrugs* maybe... kids do touch so *shrugs*
Naaaaaaaaaaruuutoooooo!!!!!!!! *ahem* I LUVS him toooooo! Cuz he's naru and I ADORE older Naru..cuz well, he's older *ahem* wtf is with my "*ahem*"s tonight?! *sleeeeeepy* But yeah, so looks like he's got himself a fun place of employment! I'd love to work at a place like that. How bout me, you, and ren start up our own publishing co? teehee Of course it would have the same name as this cuz it rocks! woots for ren on that one! i was close to it.. some reason "leaf through" came to my mind first *shrugs* lol aiyaa what will happen when Neji realizes he's missing one of his packets of cocoa?!!!! DOOOOOOOOOM that is what will happen!! MUCH DOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!! scarreh. Temari Temari Me? Temari.. can't wait to see her story.. what is this "sadness" she holds? hmmmmmmmm? But yeah... ooh can't wait to see Tsunade and Naru interact. Cuz they are always fun. Cute that Tem's gf like's Jiraiya.. teehee... perv!
Mmm yups so can't wait to see that next chap.. well, the last like 1/2 cuz i've read what you have thus far already teehee!
Anyways, must work this one to the bone (aka to the end) so that way you can get back and work on SMFO and your inu fics and all those other great ones ^__~
Much luv sista!
Me
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so...i am so happy to be reading this in an entire chapter and not just.. a random snip here and there.
john smith huh... haha awesomely creative Shika
moving outside the meaningless details... hmmmmm
mmmmm showering Shikamaru... oh my Tezuka *nosebleed*
i like how Shika seems to take it in stride.. i guess now he is used to it eh?
perhaps you should get some china markers ne? you shower thinker. of course i think shika would probably be that way.
Shikamaru would be smart enough at age 5 to make sure he touched his playmates before playing with them *laugh* awesome
He couldn’t even begin to explain how much simpler it made a busy night of work when he didn’t have to worry too much about discerning the living from the dead in the fast-paced world of face-to-face customer service. i have been thinking this for years.
methodically clothing himself...sasuke? really? *giggle* prissyboy
i really like that sasuke doesnt drive. it really makes sense...and it is a very cool detail..
without touching anyone huh... ok sasuke.
Naruto is so cute! all excited about his new job! Temari is his assistant huh... i like that.. cant wait to meet her.
Of course, he could just be a cheerful idiot such a Temari way of thinking.
ahhh so naruto has a gift too huh? i like it...
Neji's cocoa *lololololol* i love that..
hahahaha Temari's friend is a Jiriaya fan.. cuteness
awesome... something pulling naruto toward Shika's story.. i cant wait to see where it goes from here, and where you put the snippets that i have read into the next chapter.
AWESOME STORY LOVIE!
do write more soon.. i promise not to distract you with manga late at night anymore *hehe*
love love
-ren
john smith huh... haha awesomely creative Shika
moving outside the meaningless details... hmmmmm
mmmmm showering Shikamaru... oh my Tezuka *nosebleed*
i like how Shika seems to take it in stride.. i guess now he is used to it eh?
perhaps you should get some china markers ne? you shower thinker. of course i think shika would probably be that way.
Shikamaru would be smart enough at age 5 to make sure he touched his playmates before playing with them *laugh* awesome
He couldn’t even begin to explain how much simpler it made a busy night of work when he didn’t have to worry too much about discerning the living from the dead in the fast-paced world of face-to-face customer service. i have been thinking this for years.
methodically clothing himself...sasuke? really? *giggle* prissyboy
i really like that sasuke doesnt drive. it really makes sense...and it is a very cool detail..
without touching anyone huh... ok sasuke.
Naruto is so cute! all excited about his new job! Temari is his assistant huh... i like that.. cant wait to meet her.
Of course, he could just be a cheerful idiot such a Temari way of thinking.
ahhh so naruto has a gift too huh? i like it...
Neji's cocoa *lololololol* i love that..
hahahaha Temari's friend is a Jiriaya fan.. cuteness
awesome... something pulling naruto toward Shika's story.. i cant wait to see where it goes from here, and where you put the snippets that i have read into the next chapter.
AWESOME STORY LOVIE!
do write more soon.. i promise not to distract you with manga late at night anymore *hehe*
love love
-ren