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O_O *whimpers* I'm so proud of you for going your own way with this! I was surprised as hell, first that Naruto gave in to Sasuke, and then again, when he walked out. Really, excellently done! I fangirl all over you and your story. *grovels*

Noooooooooooo, why Naruto, WHY?! This has got to be one of the few stories where i'm actually hoping Naruto will do the right thing and choose Sai. TT Poor Sai, this betrayl will hurt him deeply, hopefully he'll hear it from Naru and not Sasuke or that's a time bomb right there

Hi! Just thought I'd add my two cents in. I think a threesome in this story seems incredibly unlikely, considering the emotional damage Naruto's gone through. Nevertheless, the reviews above had some very good advice about looking at viewpoints or the posting of 'alternate' stories or versions altogether, so I'll refer you to them.

Ultimately, though, this is the best advice I can give you: WRITE WHAT YOU WANT.

Seriously, you probably haven't read my story, Bitch Nights, but I've had people reviewing all over the place telling me do this, do that, I wanna see so-and-so together, and why is there so much of those two, we need less of them, etc., etc. It's enough to drive me up the wall. And god forbid I don't update for a month . . .

But this is YOUR baby. Your wonderful, fantastic, well-written baby that we all love, and we will STILL love it, no matter which way you go. You've got at least one rabid fangirl in me, and I'm sure several more in the woodworks. Don't worry too much about what we think; if YOU don't like it, then it's not worth posting.

All right, good luck! If you need anything or have questions, email me at blackwidina@hotmail.com

~Dina

This is a lovely story, weather make it three some or not- You have focus on three sets of emotions either way- I did one and it wasn't easy, I still go back and kick myself for not doing some parts as well as I would have like to have seen it-
Everyone, has their preference-
If you do want a well written three some just try to see, the way each partner would see the other two- find the understanding, or the lack there of, and decide where it could take them- Take yur time, I still have installment to mine that will take forever to finish- Because, like you I don't want it to be pointless sex-

But, in the end it is up to you-
I think this is a grand fic either way-

Well it's a great story the way it is, I suggest just keeping this as Sai and Naru (I love this kind of drama), then post a separet story containing Sai/Naru/Sasu, but add the title "Bringing the Fox to life Revised" I thinkk that would work the best, but it depends on if you want to do. That's the important thing. A Separet story would work the best.

Oh God, PLEEEEASE no threesome. Honestly, there aren't too many ways they can be done without it becoming something written just for the kinky sex. Actually I've not seen one done that hasn't eventually devolved into a story written all for the kinky sex, despite how well it started out. And personally, does Sasuke ALWAYS have to get Naruto, in whatever form. Sasuke was an asshole and all of what Naruto said was true, don't let the SasuNaru fans (or the kinky sex fans) talk you into doing something because they want to add just one more story to the already numerous SasuNaru(or kinky sex) stories. It's good to read sometimes, but every so often you want to read a story that isn't just about the sex. I've been having trouble finding those lately, and this one has given me hope. I really hope that you don't do a threesome. I'm loving the SaiNaru direction your going in and I really don't want to see it change.

I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. I love the threesome idea. Have Sai be watching what is happening and be move by Sasukes brake down. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!

I think a threesome would be a bad idea, like you said, it would be sex for the point of sex. Sai cares for Naruto, and so does Sasuke, but Naruto has moved on. If he slept with both men I think he would view it as betraying not just Sai, but Sasuke as well, a promise of something that can never again be.

But that's just my opinion.

Noooooooo, no threesome D: That would be completely unfair to Sai after waiting for so long and finally getting his oppurtunity. I feel that his feelings of hate towards Sasuke for hurting Naruto would not simply disappear because of sex. Please do now make it a threesome, I find the current way it's written just awesome

love this fic ... but pleeeeeease no 3some; sasuke just needs to suffer. ;-) i don't think sai would appreciate it, even if it was for naru's sake. maybe give sasu someone to stalk? hmmm, well obviously i'm not a muse or anything, but it just seems a shame to have this be a 3some after naru worked so hard to pull it together.