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hey can I be in  your story

oh my fucking gosh..I am on the edge of my seat with this story. @-@ please tell me you will continue writing it..!?!

Awww, I'm glad those two got together.

Oh you know I will wait for your updates. I can't help it, I am addicted to your stories. ^.^ Is Nar really going to be a stripper? LOL. I can only imagine him dancing around a pole. LOL. And I had a good laugh picturing Dei Dei in a shirt and tie. LOL. I wonder what kind of mischief he is going to get into there? And OMG you HAVE to put in a warning if you're going to put in something funny like the ninja-turtles line. You are *so* lucky I hadn't drunk anything, or you would be in big trouble missy!! LOL. It was nice seeing Madara as a human for a hot second like that with Haku, but as you told me, and as I am guessing, he will inevitibly fuck it up. I can't wait to read more of all your stories, and if I were a lesbo too, I would totally be yours too!!

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OMG!!! Sai is What??!! This is so Cool!!! I truly wasnt expecting that and i love the surprise. I especially looove the Hidan/Sai pairing. Man, u come up with some good ones Jade.:D Im so glad the bros. have someone on both sides watching them. I can totally understand Sai wanting to be the one to beat Sasuke cuz he can do it just right w/o much harm,thank goodness:)
Boy oh boy what Madara would do if he ever found Sai out. I hope Sai and Kakashi can get together:)

Aw, it sounds like you've been going through alot of stuff in real life D:

Anyway I LOVED the newest chapter, update when you can!! Madara's really a sneaky bastard! Poor sasuke, itachi and naruto, I'm glad itachi said that he and no one that he knew would use any of what madara's selling ^_^

Wow, Haku actually soften the old bastard's heart... but not enough to leave Itachi and co. alone though. Hopefully now that Madara's with Haku, Madara won't be chasing after Naruto.
Madara's been living his playboy life for a long time so I'm not sure that he's able to stay completely faithful to Haku. Especially since he's already stated that he feels lust for others, it's not that big of a step to go from lust to the bedroom with Madara.
Quick question though: Itachi will be dealing and Naruto will be what? Stripping? I can't see Itachi keeping his cool if Naruto ends up doing that, esp. around some of the more zealous clubbers.
Anyway, great chapter. I really love this story.

Awesome story, can't wait for more.

Hahah wow I totally take back what Ive said about Sai!

And the story is really amazing :D
Update soon pleasee

Oh YAY!!! When I started reading this chapter, and realized what was going on with Sai, I cheered!! Honestly. I'm so glad he's a good guy. You have no idea. Poor buddy having to dose Naruto, and beat up his cousin and stuff. I feel so bad for him. I LOVE the Sai/Hidan pairing, but I admit, my heart broke for him, when Hidan was talking/thinking about what he had to do for him to make him feel better. I can only imagine what that must feel like for him, and how hard it is for him to maintain his cover, and I can't help but be worried about him now, playing all sides like this. Madara is not a man to be trifled with, and I know if/when he ever finds out, Sai will be in deep shit, but I know that Hidan will protect him though. I love how Hidan was just as foul-mouthed, yet a bit of a softy for Sai. So sweet. I miss him terribly, since Shika blew him to bits, so it was nice to "see" him again. :) I'm glad your muse had a "nice" plan for him, but I don't trust her enough to think that poor Sai is going to walk away from this unscathed. *sigh* I'm on the edge of my seat here, hanging on by an eyelash, wondering what's going to happen next. I can't wait to read more. :) XXOO