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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The twists and turns in your story keep getting better and better. You've turned a most hated character into someone who we could sympathize with. Very cool. Although now the nagging feeling in the back in my mind is this: how long can Sai keep this up? Because he is human and humans make mistakes. In this case, the mistakes would have catastrophic results, like death at the hand of an angry drug lord.
Your writing is wonderful. Keep going!
Your writing is wonderful. Keep going!
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Now with the Hyuuga name Madara sees huge dollar signs. He's going to bring everyone down. Haku knows Madara so well. A testimont to his love for him. He totally knows a side no one else knows. Awww.:)
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're not going to lose me due to Madara's actions; I enjoy a good villian. I just want Itachi and Naruto to have a safe and stable relationship so badly because they're so perfect for each other (even though the angst makes the happy ending that much more sweeter)! Just take my outrage at Madara as a compliment to your great ability as a writer to affect your readers!
Awesome chapter! I just hope Sasuke will be okay!
Keep going!
Awesome chapter! I just hope Sasuke will be okay!
Keep going!
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ack!
I HAAATE Sai!!
Evil bastard >:o
But other than that, I LOOOOVE this story. Can't wait for the next update >__>
I HAAATE Sai!!
Evil bastard >:o
But other than that, I LOOOOVE this story. Can't wait for the next update >__>
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Nar. At least Anko is there. I knew that Madara wouldn't have Sai beat up his own nephew. So thank goodness, he said so, but still, I don't think I like him anymore. Well, kinda, but he is a bad bad bad man. ^.^ I think it's awesome that Kakashi is a detective. I think if he were real, that would be what his job was. He is perfect for it. ^.^ Poor Sasuke. Poor everyone. The shit is really starting to hit the fan eh? I love all your stories, and I know I said that "Crazy is relative" is my fav, but this one comes a close second, hell, I can't make a choice, you're just awesome all around. ^.^ I'm kinda bummed that Temari and Gaara are bad here. But I love the fact that Ino and Sakura are such sluts. LOL. I don't know, there is something about them, I just don't like them really. Ino is just a bitch, and Sakura is stupid cause she ignored Naruto all this time, and was all moony over Sasuke, until recently. Now she's starting to finally see how great Naruto is. Sort of off topic I know, just had to rant. ^.^ Still haven't watched last weeks episodes cause Jason is dumb, and we are gonna have more soon. Oh well, it will be a Naruto/Bleach orgy. Great chapter, as always, I can't wait for more. Your muse really is on kind of the mean side isn't she? LOL. So is mine. ^.^
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I almost forgot. When Iruka caught Itachi with the pain killers and water, and he was all red faced, asking if he was interrupting, coffee came out of my nose, and I sprayed my computer screen. That was funny. Iruka is so sweet, and understanding. And I am glad that even though he knew Itachi was into drugs before, he allowed him to see Naruto, and it just shows how much Itachi loved him, and wanted to be with him, by submitting to the drug tests. I can't say it enough, but I love seeing Itachi this way, and I can't get enough of of this pairing. Hmmm, when Sasuke gets out of the hopsicle is Anko going to nurse him back to health? *wiggles eyebrows* Oh, and poor Hinata, and Neji. I am ascared for them. *pouts* XXOO
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Madara is so underhanded to have an employee do his dirty work and slip Naruto a mickey in an innocent glass of water. No one would ever suspect. Damn, Madara is one determined, devious bastard.:) His plans of course are extremely selfish with the initial part being Money, but the ultimate part being Naruto to satisfy that sexual addiction he has. How despicable!! *head down,looksup maniacally and twists hands together* Muwahahahahaaaaaa, I love it!!!!!! I like his longing for Haku but he will have to give up something for him, nice. I feel really scared for the Hyuuga clan in this now that Madara has his sights set on a new plan.
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaay!!! Naruto had a wonderful night with his Boyfriend now lover. That was one HOT SMEX scene. Naruto was so anxious for it to happen. Wow! Itachi did drugs before so now Madara will think it easy to lure him back and get Naruto to boot. Bad Madara!!!!
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO about Gai. That was so funny when Naruto said something about thanking someone for the mercy fuck and that they should be sent a basket for it. I died laughing off of that!!!!! You're so funny!!!! I love the closeness of the 3 of them. They can talk to eachother about anything and everything even if it's hurtful or heartfelt. They really are a family. I'm glad to see Sasuke not being left out. I like Anko for Sasuke, never would've thought about that pairing. I love Sai in this he's so totally wicked. The smack from Madara was a riot. I could so picture that happening.
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was so in the moment when Naruto and Itachi had to tell Iruka about the drug thing. I was scared for them cause I could see Iruka being angry as hell and forbidding them from being together. I'm glad Itachi decided to give Naruto the ring beforehand. I'm glad everything turned out well for them anyway.:) Poor Iruka will he survive Naruto becoming more and more independant? Yaaay!!! Neji's in it!!!!! Naruto must've enjoyed the feeling of the drug to be going to Madara's club sans Itachi. He was also showin' off a bit for Neji wasn't he? Madara is making me nervous about his plan to 'employ' Naruto and his own nephew.:(