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for Coming Up F'in Roses

by Shaylilin

schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's just keeps getting better and better.
I'm excited to see what Madara plans to do.
And the fluff with Itachi and Naruto, it's so cute. *squeals like a fangirl*
But I'm really starting to get worried about Naruto though, he'll get addicted unconsciously. Poor 'Tachi.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs


person ZenithB
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so good. More please!!! XD
person qwerty
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! Devious is too weak a word for Madara!
Argh! I can't believe he's deliberately trying to get Naruto hooked! What a loser!
And Haku! I can't believe he would cheat on poor innocent Hinata. She'll be so crushed!
I noticed that Haku didn't mention her last name to Madara. I just have a feeling that Madara is going to create even more twisted plans when he finds out Hinata's a Hyuuga. Yes, Haku said that she's a partner to a multi-million company but there are a lot of rich companies out there!
Anyway, great chapter. Loved it! Keep going!
person SB
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you really don't know how to write guys.
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seriously SB? And you post anonymous so no one can see if you have written anything? Dude, Jade Rose is the queen of Naruto slash. If it makes you feel inadequate, sorry for you..next time grow some balls and post when you're logged in or under your pen name, especially whem flaming. ^.^
person zen_with_me
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good...can't wait to read more
person qwerty
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what Itachi has on his mind... and Madara is going to be devious, I can tell.
Great chapter!
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, how did I miss two chapters? I honestly check at least a couple times a day for updates. ^.^ Anhywho, I knew once I read 'belly shirt' that it was Sai, but I would never have expected him to do that. Did Madara punish him? Oh, and speaking of Madara, holy fuck woman!! He is one depraved man. Is it wrong that I like it? LOL. Poor Naruto, getting dosed like that though, at least he didn't freak out, and give himself a massive anxiety attack. *looks around whistling innocently* The promise ring was sweet, I love reading about Itachi in a sweet and loving way. He and Naruto are so cute together. And I am also glad Iruka didn't freak out on them. Naruto going to Madara's place made me worried, and then Itachi calling just as Naruto left.....*dramatic music* The angst, and whatnot is coming up soon isn't it? Well, as I have been 'reading' you for awhile now, I know that your muse isn't entirely mean. Well hopefully not anyways. LOL. Can't wait for more, I was actually thinking about this story last night wondering when you were going to update it, and I got a two-chapter suprise orgy!! Woo-hoo!! XXOO
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I'm dying in a good way, so don't worry, besides I think I'm starting to become quite cat-like.. nine lives and all...hmm...XD
Anyway, this chapter totally rocked! The thing with Gai was hilarious, because I agree, who would want to sleep with him? ;P haha
And as usual Itachi and Naruto are so cute together..this is heaven for me right here...oh, the fluff...
And I really liked that you paired Sasuke up with Anko, because if it were Sakura, Ino or Karin I'd probably barf...ugh..*shivers* Anko's really cool, and I think that she and Sasuke make a really nice couple, so thanks for that! ;)
And I kinda like Madara, yes, he's a horny druggie, but I find him rather amusing...;P
I'm starting to get a bit worried about Naruto though, I think he might get addicted. But I guess that's one of the bigger events/plots of this fic am I right? But since Naruto got Itachi and Sasuke, I guess that whatever may happen, they'll be there for him to help him out, hopefully. Anyway, I'm totally speculating too much....sorry....I tend to do that... ^///^
So keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shit that was hot. *fans self rapidly with magazine* Man. It would have been better, had my children not been bothering me through half of it. Why is it that kids can always sense the moment when you really don't want to be bothered, then they pester the fuck out of you. Poor Naruto's heiny. LOL. It's really nice seeing Itachi all sweet and loving and caring. I was reading your other review repsonses, and saw that you were worried about Nar's birthday chapter being filler. I mean if you consider that filler.....Great chapter, spectacular first time. It was well worth the wait. If my House one, and my other one turns out to be half as hot, I'll be a happy girl!! XXOO