rate_review Reviews

While I could appreciate the lemon, what really stood out to me in this was the flashback. It was a sublime choice of wording and phrasing.

*Bows down in respect*

I really did like the ending ^^ Its sweet enough to know they really care but its more the sexiness that will will stick with me.

And ya know, I can honestly say I just know this is going to be one of those things that I'll remember for at least a very long time!

I'd say forever, but I'm awfully forgetful *cry*

Anyways, its very very good and totally made my night!

Whoa.That was unexpected, I don't know why, perhaps the emotion.I think it's IC for the fic cause we all know how much Itachi feels for his bro.It was a great make out and the end was perfect to me.Well done, the emotions in the car and at the beginning were gripping.Yup I like.

That was really awesome! Love it!

I just noticed the 1st review. That was not constructive critism. It was personal attack. Ignore it. Your writing is better than 80% of stuff posted in this forum.

Hey I just wanted to let you know that I really loved your one-shot. I think you did really well with Sasuke's POV and I absolutly adore the whole plot idea-it was really sweet. Also I think it was a brilliant and emotional place to end the story so don't worry about it. By the way don't listen to who ever wrote that 1st review- I don't even have the words to describe how stupid they are x_x.

Well, don't worry, the grammar, along with every other capitalized word in that review, is completely and UTTERLY useless in the fabric of the universe. It was written by someone who cannot write or fathom/accept any other lifestyle and is therefore useless in the next step of human evolution. Please, do not 'ram your vag with a railroad spike'? You write wonderfully and the beauty of writing is that it is your own pursuit of happiness and is not against the law of anything. If people don't like yaoi they shouldn't read it, and if they do read it and leave a nasty review as the previous one, they obviously cannot read and may have many self-esteem issues, likely caused by not being loved as a child, they must deal with. Please remain in touch with your INNER-WRITER and keep up your wonderful work. It was emotional and worth more than a random title of pornography. Sexuality is beautiful. Thanks for your share :)

((I'm too lazy to log in but I'm LadyAlyceTheSmexyNeko ))

Hmmm... Now I want to do a fiction that ends in a werid spot. Or starts from the end and works it's way back to the beginning.