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August 3, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Continuation please friend
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February 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
good story. but too many spelling and grammatical mistakes.
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July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
said Shino knowing that if Naruto lied he would no thanks to his new bugs in him that detected such things.
convoluted wording. I suggest simplifying it. Such as "said Shino; he would know if Naruto lied due to the new breed of bugs/insects in him."
like the premise!
convoluted wording. I suggest simplifying it. Such as "said Shino; he would know if Naruto lied due to the new breed of bugs/insects in him."
like the premise!
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August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't mind naruto being perverted but it shouldn't define him like it does the toad sage that's all I'd ask for in reading any perverted naruto stories
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
SO AWESOME!!!
please update these stories sometime ftedive applied
please update these stories sometime ftedive applied
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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
MOOOORE!!!!!!
wonder who is next in line???
wonder who is next in line???
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well in a way Hinata is a future MILF
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your thoughts betray you Ten-chan. I know all about your fantasies. I know how you like the idea of being spanked and how the idea of being submissive like the Branch Family of the Hyuuga Clan are to the Main turns you on so badly," said Naruto, as he spanked Tenten again five more times, and felt her whimper at the rubbing of the tenderized cheek.
This might also explain why she likes neji despite not acting like his fangirl
This might also explain why she likes neji despite not acting like his fangirl
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February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Seems that one of the few force powers you have Naruto use is the mind trick and the force bubble it would really be nice if we get to see more power in a form of an aphrodisiac way for Naruto to use, another thing that the story needs is some sort of a villain or a rival some one that would want to take his slaves away from hims like a sith lord, if you´re looking for some inspiration for lemon scenes jut in case your muse is unavailable, hentai images can help you a lot.
They say tha a picture is word a thousand words, well just imagine how many pages a simple hentai fanart is worth in words. Doujinshi is also a great form of help considering of how detailed of the sex scenes are, here are some artist and doujinshi circles that i recommend you and might help;
sunahara wataru: this guy does some great art with his hentai and some of the recent drawings id seen are fantastic to get you in the mood to write lemons,currently in geelboru are only eight images but the one with Sakura,Ino,Hinata,Tenten,Temari having their legs tied to as pole while being fucked is amazing.
Linda:his work are hard to find as some of his mangas are taken from sites, but youll be amazed as how well his detail for the artwork is, and currently his 6 stories are the best except with 3 since is a sakusasu.
Naruho: this one is a hit and miss because of the art wile is okay getting a closer look he needs to practice on his feet but the stories are funny and great.
hope this helps you and im about to release a fic on my own soon and really look fpward to see new stories and more updates bye.
They say tha a picture is word a thousand words, well just imagine how many pages a simple hentai fanart is worth in words. Doujinshi is also a great form of help considering of how detailed of the sex scenes are, here are some artist and doujinshi circles that i recommend you and might help;
sunahara wataru: this guy does some great art with his hentai and some of the recent drawings id seen are fantastic to get you in the mood to write lemons,currently in geelboru are only eight images but the one with Sakura,Ino,Hinata,Tenten,Temari having their legs tied to as pole while being fucked is amazing.
Linda:his work are hard to find as some of his mangas are taken from sites, but youll be amazed as how well his detail for the artwork is, and currently his 6 stories are the best except with 3 since is a sakusasu.
Naruho: this one is a hit and miss because of the art wile is okay getting a closer look he needs to practice on his feet but the stories are funny and great.
hope this helps you and im about to release a fic on my own soon and really look fpward to see new stories and more updates bye.
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must admit that I have not yet read a fanfiction that used the force it is very original and I love the direction that your going with it.