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I love this story so far I just started reading it and I plan to read more but I have a question This is the first time I have tried, How and where on this site do I go if I am trying to find a story ?

I am trying to find a story in the Naruto area where Naruto is tricked into using Sexy neo jituse and is then raped by all the main character men and then is stuck in that form. Also I tryed to sign up for the forum and it asked for a authors address but I do not know what that is and couldn't complete the registery for the forums

Lara

Lara_Wakim@yahoo.com

have a Inuzuka threesome on the next chap

"Damn straight Hinata-chan. Just like Anko-chan, who is my sexy psycho snake bitch that loves my cock just as much as you do, and wants to be fucked relentlessly by me," said Naruto, as he loved hearing the girls moan beneath him, and loved fucking them like this.

I would say get a beta, but I don't think you can "fix" writing like this.

My first pick is Tayuya, she survived her encounter with Temari and after recovering descides to get pay back on Naruto and his friends for her humiliating defeat. So she sneaks back into Konoha with stealth but Naruto's connection to the force alerts him to her. So when Naruto catches her and takes her to her "new home" at his apartment/sex dungeon no one knows and cares except, what Naruto wants with her. (evil chuckle), Or my second choice the fish girl Isaribi gets her transformation stabilized that she looks human or can transform into her aquatic form at will. Wanting to "thank" Naruto for his kindness she moves into his apartment complex and well Naruto sinces her desire, and Naruto decides to have some sushi with plenty of juice for dinner with her (whip cream chocolate and cherrys for desert yummmy). Or better yet both it's up to you so (gets on hands and knees)PLEASE PICK THEM FOR NARUTO's NEW PLAYMATES PLEASE!!!! Keep up the great work and it's good hearing from you agiain!

Hanabi!

I'd say... Kurenai, have her get acousted by some pervert just after getting back from a mission and Naruto plays the gallant knight saving her since she's to tired to deal with the pervert herself. He gets her to the hot springs and uses sexy no Jutsu and the force to get in to tend to her and make sure she recovers. From there I'm in a blank, but the idea of Kurenai making out with Hinata and Anko is awesome!

I think Sakura should be next. With the power of the force, Naruto can open Sakura's eyes to her undying love and devotion to him. I'm sure you can come up with something for her, as long as she's in the harem.

Thank you for the update you are a genius when it comes to fic`s like this one, okay while the lates chapter was a little short it`s in a good way. here are some ideas of mine that could be for some future fic`s, if you like them or not its you`re choice anyway:

1-Naruto Bible Black crossover
2-pokegirls
3-Dead O Alive Xtreme volleyball(naruto invites the girls to his island)
also here are some of the characters you could use:

Tsume
Hana
Hinata
Tsunade(reverse age jutsu)
Ino
Temari
Yugao
Kurenai
yoshino (shikas mom)
Kyuubi female
Nibi Female

Another great chapter I can't wait to see how he gets them all knocked up especially Tsume considering she's a mother and I wonder who else he will add to his growing family.

Awesome chapter update soon.