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for Pervert Unleashed

by VFSNAKE

schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapter update soon.
person nm1716
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON!!!
person Mageta
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really great, wished you could've let Hana walk in on them and then Naruto use his powers to influence her into a threeway. That would have been even more amazing.
person ecorate
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update soon plz that took a bit but good work hope u do naruto with 2 or mor girs soon
person José Garriga
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have only one thing to say to ywo:

In Dark Bader's voice: "What is thy betheng My master"

person Anon
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is hilarious, and can't wait for Tusanade and Kurenai
person Leria
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't say any of Naruto's thoughts or actions have been 'evil' thus far. Outside of 'normal' sexual morality, yes. Evil, no... it ain't like he is tying up women and flaying them alive during sex or something like that.
person Woo
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really nice, cant wait to see more of it
person Pinkney
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thabk you for the review. As for my other story, someone took it off this sight and I didn't save the chapters which sucks but that's what happened.

Again thanks for the review and I can't wait for more of your stories here and on Fanfiction.net

As Always keep up the great work!!!
person Anttolas
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it and want to read more so please keep writing:)