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by VFSNAKE

person Random Reviewer
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Try and make some shots with Yugito(maybe Nibi with Yoruichi's body), Koyuki Kazahana(princess from the 1st Naruto movie), Shion from the Shippudan movie, Hana and Tsume(together, seperate, or both), Yugao Uzuki, Shizune, Isaribi, Yakumo, a captured Tayuya/Kin, captured Fuka, Konan, and Ayame(ramen girl). Need to know who they are and what they do just ask.
person KaelHyun
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He's going after Kurnai next isnt he? Well I hope you add Sakura, Tenten, Tamari, Hana, Tsume, Kin, Tayuya, and Yuugo(sp)
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MILF huh? So let's see, depending on whether you do resurrections or not that narrows it down to Tsunami, Yoshino, Tsume, Mikoto, and Kurenai (MILF-to-be last I knew). I don't know of any other mothers featured in the series but I might have missed some.
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude I loved what you did with Anko and I can't wait to see what going to happen next. MILF huh? Okay that brings up two people, Kurenai or Tsunade which I can't dicide I want to see next. A possible Naruto/Hinata/Kurenai or Naruto/Tsunade which could be a wild party. Please update this great story soon. And keep the great work.
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Naruto uses the force to turn into a rapist. This is like the story of the invisible man, although I've never agreed with its concept that if you were no longer held responsible for your actions because you were invisible (or in this case, had the force) that mankind would turn to unmoral and criminal acts. Maybe Naruto should see Tsunande about having his mitachlorian levels reduced, cause all force business is making him no good.


Keep up the good work. This is a silly concept for a story, but sometimes silly can be good. Although I some how think it would read better if instead of borrowing "the force" from Star Wars, you changed this very same power to some Kyuubi/Demonic based ability. The force is such a left wing concept that it takes you out of the story. Oh, and you should probably give credit in your disclaimer to Lucas, since this site tends to frown upon not giving credit where credit it due.
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If MILFs are the next thing coming I suggest a visit to Wave to have fun with Tsunami, she is hot!
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
which MILF there are lots of hot older naruto girls im hoping for tsume(kibas mom) cant wait for the next part
person ?
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is the best I have read in along time. spelling could be better but I myself get in a hurry sometime and do the same thing. keep up the good work.
person DarkestShadow22
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THIS was great. I think I would doing more of a collection of one shots that are tied together, then the giant orgy of doom. It gets hard to keep up with twenty something women at once. I think that the first few chaps of your storys are great but all the characters muck thing up after a bit.