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for Ultimate Sin

by naracest

person RyuEarth
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My Poor Iruka! T_T He needs a hug big time! =/
Thanks for answering my question, and thanks for the update! XD
person qwerty
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I liked how you gave a teaser in the 1st chapter, and are now flashing-back to what led up to that point. Good writing style.
update!
person RyuEarth
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This sounds very interesting, though I'm curious, how old is Iruka? I'm curious since he went to jail =)