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for Iruka's Pet

by SumiHatake

schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really do hope you continue this tale couse i like it it shows a diffrent side to some very hot ninja
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol i have to say i was thinking of a dog in the beginning lol. but genma wow, he is one hot puppy lol. and having him appear naked lol kakashi really is something else lol. i love this.
person LadyPiro
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I love Iruka's 'Sensei Voice'!
person Word_Slave
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was very nicely done. and I know how hard threesomes are to write!
slave
I loved the premise
person Anise
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*melts* That was seriously hot! (with genma how could it not be) I've read this before haven't I, I mean there was a lot less smut but the beginning and end were the same, either that or I'm losing my mind which is also entirely possible ;)
Actually I found this at the lj comm which lead me to look at your journal, which I don't think I've ever done before and I loved the pics (and you mentioned me *squishesu*). This lead me to check your da and from there I ended up spending the last hour looking at your stuff and checking out at your friends, seriously if I'm not careful I'll find myself addicted to that site all over again :)
Anyway fun and fabulous story, and I don't always like the whole punishment thing (can sometimes feel too degrading&abusive) but this was just sexy!