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I really wonder what Sasuke's up to!
These were really good chapters. Everything from chapter two. Yeah, I haven't been here in a while. But they were good!
Naruto is kind of confusing... He has really weird mood changes... Like more than can be normal or expected.
Besides that, and you refusing to tell us what Sasuke is up to (meanie), it's all really awesome!
So, I can't wait for the next chapter (hopefully before six months) and good luck writting it!
XD LANE

Thanx for a really nice story! The plot's good - so, which of them will fall in love faster?.. Please write more! Want to see Naruto learn his maths... poor boy.
But it's not quite clear why their parents decided to marry them , because Naru's got no money. So why?..

Great work love the story so far keep it up NE

Can't wait to read more. I am very curious on how the story is going to progress.

sasuke falls for naru-chan right. i'll beat him up if he hurts naru-chan. -crosses arms and pouts-

good update cant wait to read more.

Ok, I think your story has a really good plot line and characterization. The writing lacks fluidity, but who's doesn't honestly. All in all, your writing style is good and captivating. You seemed to be screaming for some feedback, so I thought I'd oblige. Hopefully you don't think I'm mean and I haven't offended you. I also don't think that Naruto should drunkenly shout out his relationship with Sasuke. It reminds me too much of 10 things I hate about you, which is my own weirdness I guess. Anyway, its up to you. Its your creation, so I'll just wait patiently for your next update.

i cant tell if theyre confused or just exzorbed in their own worlds but this makes for a killer story.personally i hate the sent of smoke but i guess its okay it works for sasuke he seems to need some kind of addiction and nicotin is better than illegal drugs...sometimes.im just wondering kiba and the gangs reaction to sasuke knowing naruto.i dont really like the idea of naruto embarrassing himself and making an outcast of him self so soon so im not really for him getting drunk but im wondering if hell ever makes a friend of gaara,is gaara even in this?well whatever your choice ill continue to read

i like what happens next.

heh, nice update.

OMG!!!! What could Sasuke possibly want to tell Naruto? Maybe he wants to tell him not to say anything about their engagement or who to hang with and who not to. Well, I'm excited about this story and can't wait for the next update. I also like the history behind the names used in the school. You've got a great story here.:)