rate_review Reviews

that was indeed short ^^ (I can't blame you, I write short chapters myself too so..) But good beginning!
I'll look forward to see how this story will go on from here.

I like this story. The style's good, the character seems interesting and not OOC (well, not really. But you can't have him on the rampage trying to kill his brother, because that just makes it boring).
I'll make you a deal. You update regularly, and I'll review eache chapter! If I'm there, which I usually am. I get the better end of the deal. And yes I know, sucks for you! XD
I can't wait to meet Naruto... He's either completely into Sasuke and not at all. And at the moment, I can have no idea.
Oh, all powerfull writter, tell us more!
Okay, I have a cold, so this review might sound kind of weird, but most of my reviews do, especially when I like a story...
Okay, well. I can't wait for the next chapter, so good luck with finishing it!
XD LANE

This was a great first chapter and I can't wait to read more!

ok...good story...now im just addicted...i know i know...already? right...update soon please..cant wait to see what happens

I think this is a good opening. You've introduced a few characters and set Sasuke's mood. I will be looking forward to chapter 2.