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That's a shocker. I would say it seems like it's going to a better direction. I think Diedera is cool but Itachi is a better choice. Hotter for me anyway. Anything with Itachi on it is hot, especially the way you describe him. What's going on w/ Madara. It doesn't seem like it's going to sound good. I'd like a good Madara for a chance.
Thank a million for the update.

At first I thought Naruto would be with Itachi until Deidara came into the picture...now I'm definetly not sure. Loving the fic!

Sasuke still disappoints. He is still taking calls from Gaara. After the whole pushing in and marking him so that Naruto would see thing. The fact that you know he might be looking for sex, you still take his call?

You overdo the whole can't get over love thing with Naruto in my opinion. He had the right attitude. It may hurt but you can move on.

How many of us are Still with our first love? Our first lover? Are they even the same people? The answer is not many.

And in most cases it isn't even over cheating.

That said, I can live with it if you put them back together. It seems like you are heading that way. If I was Naruto's friend I would smack him in the head for doing it, hope Kiba does. But I could live with it.

On the other hand I can't get Madara out of my head. You describe him much like canon. Which reminds me of Jiraiya. In canon he is over fifty but looks twenty years younger, and unlike his teammates he isn't using a jutsu to get that.

Sure Madara is an evil bastard but of all the Uchiha he is the only one with a playful side. Naruto likes Orange. I can see the roleplay now. Sasuke might complain about Naruto being a one trick pony but Madara could fix that. Because Tobi is a good boy.

On the Itachi front Naruto is already having naughty thoughts. They are bonding over Ai. He would be good for grounding them both, keeping them from being to Uchiha.

O.o Naruto's dream was hot...>.> fuck Sasuke i say go for itachi or Deidara.

I love this fic and I was happy to see an update. I can't wait to find out what Madara will bring to the story and I thought it very fitting that you called him the Big Bad Wolf. :) I wondered what happened with the car and if anyone got hit, I hope not. Please update soon!

Kyaaa! A new chapter! This totally made my day, which until now had sucked because I'm sick at the moment, so I'm really happy now. :) And what a chapter by the way, I've god an 'oh my god' feeling coursing through my core.
Firstly, I love you for putting Deidara into the story, I totally cracked a smile at the way he and Naruto met. The boy with the broom made me laugh, that was hilarious, though I can understand him. :P I also love that you wrote that Deidara couldn't be mistaken for a girl despite his somewhat feminine appearance, because I really don't understand how people can mistake him for being a girl, he looks very male to me... *smirk* I'm glad you share my opinion. :)
Itachi's adorable with Aiko, I can see him holding her to his chest like that, so cute! *fangirl squeal* And the there was Madara! Too bad he's over fifty, or else I would have thought he would be one to fight for Naruto's affection along with Sasuke and maybe someone else. You've got me extremely confused about the main pairing of this story, I honestly can't tell which it will be, but perhaps that's your intention?
At first I thought that Deidara and Naruto might get together, but Naruto doesn't seem to have any further interest in him beyond that of friends, so I don't know. Itachi is dependent of Naruto because of Aiko but he doesn't seem to like Naruto in a romantic way at all. Sasuke still wants Naruto back, and somehow it seems as if he might succeed, which worries me because I believe that he doesn't deserve a second chance, especially for keeping the "relationship" with Gaara for so long. I'm so confused, I really can't wait to see how it will turn out.
Speaking of Gaara, I don't hate him at all. He's in love with someone who clearly doesn't love him back, and that makes my heart bleed out to him especially after reading about the incident in this chapter. Poor little raccoon... :(
Oh, of course, I forgot... damn cliffhanger! Though, I'm not too mad because I use them as well, but as a reader they're worse than Gai in a pink ballerina outfit bending forward.... horrifying, yes, that would be the proper term. *shudders*
I just hope that both Naruto and Gaara is alright, they've both gone through so much pain and heartache that it would be unfair to cause them more. I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out.
Det här var verkligen ett fantastiskt kapitel, jag är helt chockad av allt som hände i det. Man blev glad men ändå ledsen, orolig men förväntansfull. Du behöver inte gömma dig under stenen längre, jag är där och skyddar dig tillsammans med Gaara och hans yxa :P. Många läsare som inte själva skriver kan oftast inte förstå att kapitel inte skriver sig själva och att författarna också har ett eget liv där mycket kan ske. Låt dig inte påverkas av kommentarer där folk klagar, ta din tid för det är viktigt att man inte känner sig tvingad, dessutom är alla dina berättelser och kapitel så oerhört välskrivna, så det är bättre att du tar den tid du behöver för att kunna skriva på ett sådant sätt. Och att ha press på sig tar även det roliga ur skrivandet, man känner inte längre en lika stor entusiasms för det, så tänkt inte på jobbigt folk och skriv för nöjet och viljans skull. :)
Hoppas att allt är bra med dig. Ha en trevlig fortsatt vecka.
*Kramar*

Gaah what a cliffie! What will happen now?

Really like the story (seriously despise Sasuke), but there seems to be one important thing missing at this point... Anko's funeral and all that a funeral involves. Plus it's hard to believe that at least one or both of Naruto's parents wouldn't come home for a death of a loved one, even if their friend is sick.

I am sorry but I feel no sympathy for Gaara.

I am so happy that Itachi is out of his funk though!

When will there be more?