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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Since I can't read this on y! yet, I'll review it here. That was very eventful indeed! It was random and sexy for Asuma to be pounding into Iruka, and then for him to be married. It definitely gave a parallel, and now Sasuke fucked up. Go Naruto for being strong, now Sasu can work his ass off getting Naruto back. Hope your surgery goes perfectly. Love, ~Sangostar
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok I finally read the last two chapters of the prequel to this and I was so happy with the ending and very happy to see you made a sequel to it. This chapter was good!!! I like that Sai is still in it as well as Kiba. I'm so angry with Sasuke for ditching Naruto for the past few friday nights and then to see he's clubbing with a classmate, I love Gaara, AND making out is just too much!!!!!! I hope Naruto gives it to him good!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Simi, I pray for your surgery to be a total success. I also pray for you to have a speedy and successful recovery.8) This chapter was so, so good!!! I was so glad Naruto left him and he took the words out of my mouth when he told Sasuke did he think he was supposed to sit there with his arms open wide for him. Sasuke has no excuses saying it just happened. Wasn't he the one who taught Naruto all the sex he knows since Naruto was a virgin in the beginning. Sasuke should've been trying new things with him all along if that was the case. I'm so disappointed in Sasuke. I love this story because I've never read Sasuke being this way with Naruto before. It's really different and I can't wait to see how these issues resolve themselves. Oh, and I also loved when Naruto said something about how he loves Sasuke but one day he'll wake up one morning..., that was GREAT!!!!!!! Good Luck on Monday again.:3
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!! I forgot to say that I was real surprised to see Asuma and Iruka, that's a nice pairing I've never thought of.:) Then I was shocked to learn Asuma is married but then later when I read 'a marriage of conveniance' I was relieved.:) Nice twist in characters.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, really, it's awesome! My eyes got teary when I read the second chapter, the way you described it, it was so sad because I felt so sorry for Naruto. I've read your fic, The Boy Next Door, and it was great as well, but I actually am starting to think that this one is better. Will this continue to be a SasuNaric-fc by the way? If not, it would be so totally awesome if Naruto could get together with Itachi, and show the bastard Sasuke that Itachi is and always will be better than him ;P hehe, just a suggestion. Since you know, check my name and all.. I always have to ask, there's no harm in that, is it? XD. Other pairings will be fine too, as well as SasuNaru of course.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thats so damn depressing, but he desreved that and he knew he did.i cant understand what he was thinking,i just cant grasp the thought process.well hope your sergery goes well the depression will kill,spinal sergery sounds almost as bad as cramial sergery.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a very cool break up scene. real powerful. i can't wait for the next chapter. i have never seen iruka paired with asuma before. lol it seems so strange.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the chapter....take your time updating......your health is more important.......your true readers will understand......i know i do......good luck.
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
shit,this is why i dont get people.you stay for 2 years and be faithfull(hopefully)then you do shit like this,he should fight beat him till he cant feel anything anymore but that probly wont solve any problems will it or make you feel better forever.its heatbreaking so lets break some faces to acomodate our pain.hope you can update soon
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!!! sasuke that basterd...... UPdate this one please i want to kn what happens