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for Gaara's got yummy tummy

by therar

person 7mizu8
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was awesome. It's funny to think of Gaara being stoned ^_^
About the writing stuff, you're pretty good over all. Some of your spelling is off and maybe a few words are out of place but there aren't too many errors. Good Job and thanks a lot for the awesome story!
I read the first story too. It was also frikin hot! =D
person 7mizu8
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah hahaha you have made an awesome Gaara!
Awesome stuff! =D