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Love it! Though, I’m not sure if you already decided on whom your going to pair Naruto with, but I really, really hope that you pair him with both Sasuke and Neji, threesomes are always more yummy and interesting then a twosome :D I mean, can you imagine all the things those two could be doing to our beloved Naruto? Think of all the delicious possibilities ^_^ Please, please say that you’ll think about it?

Please update chapter 7 soon ^_^

Jan

PS: If it’s not t o much to ask is there a way that you could email me a notice when you next update?
My email is naiomi2nailyn@yahoo.com

WOW...that is so OCC of Neji...I love it! I love Neji and all, but I would love to have Sasuke and Naruto hook up....but you know what would be better.....Naruto and Sasuke AND Neji....shit, that would be sooooo HOT!!!!

Post soon!

Read your authurs note... All I ask is in the end, Please be *NaruSasu* It would make me so Happy!!

New installment isn't horrible, but I will advise that you avoid any blatant or excessive Sakura bashing. It's one of the quickest ways to get the more discerning people on the site to not take you seriously. Also this chapter felt slightly rushed in how in went through the action, like you were trying to find the quickest way to get from beginning to end. I find a way to add a bit more too it, though not so much that it's weighed down.

Oh and I'd also like to advise you that the formatting of your newest chapter is odd. It stretched past the edge of the screen. I'd try re-uploading, maybe using a different method to see if it fixes the problem. Otherwise, maybe asking one of the mods for help.

love this story!!!! i can't wait to find out who naruto picks!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn!! Sasuke was so pressed he mentioned those flowers a dozen times. With Sakura as his date tonight, Neji will get all the alone time he wants to be with his blond. Sasuke'll be fuming by the end of the party.

dammit !!! why they(Naruto and Sasuke) just not have hot sex... i don't like waiting....make that Neij freak and Sakura slut just to end together...and end of the story....


P.S. i hope that pairings in this story will be SasuXNaru....i like you story very much...i just don't like to wait

haha.. she doesn't stand a chance! ^^

Keep up the good work!

Oh I like this fic and I would pick Neji but I know how much everyone loves Sasuke for Naruto. I do too but I pick Neji. Who is Gaara marrying in a couple of weeks or is it someone we don't know?