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that WAS a bet worth losing lol ill keep an eye out for updates on this set of shorts and shots

nyaa kawaii ne! i liked how shika said you couldn't compare ramen and bbq cuz it wasn't fair... much deeper meaning hidden within! i heart shika/naru... can't wait for more and can't wait for tutu!

love ya tomotan!

awww This story was reeeeaaaally sweet!!!!!
Thanks!

well... heh.. here is another one.. my lovely Shikamaru... and his little blonde mate.
the beginning, with the quoting the lyrics made me feel all bubbly.
i love how i can always... see the complete scene so clearly in your fics.. your detail is awesome!
ohhh like Shika would ever believe that Naruto was gonna try to compare something to ramen!
awwwww naruto and his conflicting mind.
Shika feeding him... total love.
**shivers** i wanna see intense and sexy shika eyes looking at me..
'since when are you shy?' *melts* sexxxxxxxxy shika
*finishes with tears* nyaaa it was so gentle and cute! i love the sexiness mixed in with the sappiness.. it goes well together
I like how it ended, although a lemon wouldnt have bothered me a bit. glad to see another one...
cant wait for the next!
love love!
rita.

AH, I love ShikaNaru! Please write more!

This was awesome! The shadow kink was wicked, I've never seen that before. ^_^ I loved how you paid attention to detail with your writing, too. There really aren't enough ShikaNaru fics out in the world of fanfiction... I look forward to your next update.

I have CONVERTED!!!! you.. and tsuma to my love of Naru/Shika! YOSH! lmao... notice how it's alllllllll been about the shadow-shinobi as of late? mmm it's a good thing, yus? YUS!

Wow... shadow-kink.. when you first mentioned it to me I was like O.o ummmmmm kz? But then I thought about it and then thought "WTF hasn't anyone done this before?!" lol And, now you have... and it was flippin' fantastic!

Poor Shika though... he needs some better chakra reservoirs cuz that boy runs out QUICK! And.. with Naru as his lover... You GOTS to have STAMINA! teehee

Anywho's... can't wait to see what other drabbles that'll show up in this collection. wooots! ashiteruuuuuuu tomotan!

Me

mmmm shadow love.
and yeah.. a foot massage by a shadow would rule.
omt dude so hot. i am just.. picturing this happen.. and like.. ohhhmmyytezuka.. what a sexy scene
“Patience, Naruto. It’s troublesome, but I’m going to teach you what patience is all about.” that is so sexy...
mmm sexy shika is like...omt omt dude there isnt much in this fic so far that hasnt made me hawt. damn dude..
i like the way you describe the feeling of the shadow. It is how i would expect a shadow to feel.. *wants to feel shika's shadow O__O
*shudder at thinking of tasting shika's chakra* how erotic is that? VERY
ahhhhh dudeeeeeee yummmy!!! shika playing with is own nipple so that naruto would do it.. mmm that is hot.. i am like overloading
on hot Shikamaru dude.. totally.
nyanyanya! you are awesome.. are you sure this isnt MY birthday fic?
altered version indeed lmao
that was a cute ending. i LOVED this fic dude! it was SO erotic. one of your best onesies i think. maybe it is because i love shika.
could be...
anyways.. great job. i am glad someone put that shadow idea to good use. DAMN good use. DOUBLE DAMN good use.
but i digress.
whatever that means
love you
great fic
cant wait
to see more
-ren

*drools* OMG!!!! that was HAWT!

the way that Shika was able to get Naru all hot and horny with shadows made me happy!!! I just love how you were able to keep both of their personalities intact as well!!!

great job!