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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really sweet! Naruto's concern about Sasuke being colorblind makes me 'awww' and giggle. Sasuke's real reason for using that towel makes me awww even more! I love how a teasing phrase from Kiba turned into such a fun tradition for Naruto and Sasuke lol.
And, rather than having full-out smut, I think the way you fit in sweet descriptions of different moments with them was awesome. Getting a glimpse of more than one hot moment between them is actually just as satisfying to me, if not more so, in this instance. It goes really well with the style of storytelling in this one.
Wow, I really like this line: whimpering Naruto’s name, begging for him to stop, to never stop, to hurry up and to, dear god, please, slow down AMAZING description. &hearts
Sasuke suspected that Gaara knew though and considered it a personal gift that somewhere, on his birthday, Sasuke Uchiha was taking it up the ass. ahahahaha, another great line. *gigglesnort*
“Hmmm, this towel smells like you, Sasuke. Nice.” awww! (again hehe)
mmm, and Naruto's description of what he was going to do "to Sasuke's shirt" lol..ahh, yumm
AHAHAHAAHA i love Naruto's excuse for why they had to leave the party. And Sasuke playing along. Yeah, that's not obvious, guys. *giggle* Too cute.
The description of how haphazardly their clothes were discarded (lol, the buttons DID get ripped off.. and not one but TWO items of clothing on the fan..lmao)
And Sasuke's gift: fucking awesome. Sweet and hilarious and HOT all at once. heehee PERFECT
Awesome job, I'm so glad I got to read this! Thank you!
~ lg
And, rather than having full-out smut, I think the way you fit in sweet descriptions of different moments with them was awesome. Getting a glimpse of more than one hot moment between them is actually just as satisfying to me, if not more so, in this instance. It goes really well with the style of storytelling in this one.
Wow, I really like this line: whimpering Naruto’s name, begging for him to stop, to never stop, to hurry up and to, dear god, please, slow down AMAZING description. &hearts
Sasuke suspected that Gaara knew though and considered it a personal gift that somewhere, on his birthday, Sasuke Uchiha was taking it up the ass. ahahahaha, another great line. *gigglesnort*
“Hmmm, this towel smells like you, Sasuke. Nice.” awww! (again hehe)
mmm, and Naruto's description of what he was going to do "to Sasuke's shirt" lol..ahh, yumm
AHAHAHAAHA i love Naruto's excuse for why they had to leave the party. And Sasuke playing along. Yeah, that's not obvious, guys. *giggle* Too cute.
The description of how haphazardly their clothes were discarded (lol, the buttons DID get ripped off.. and not one but TWO items of clothing on the fan..lmao)
And Sasuke's gift: fucking awesome. Sweet and hilarious and HOT all at once. heehee PERFECT
Awesome job, I'm so glad I got to read this! Thank you!
~ lg
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sexy as ever! I for one can't be mad about another one shot from you when it's that good ^_^
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke suspected that Gaara knew though and considered it a personal gift that somewhere, on his birthday, Sasuke Uchiha was taking it up the ass. - Best line EVER!
Except I loved Naruto's reaction to Sasuke's present at the end too. A brilliant one shot!
Except I loved Naruto's reaction to Sasuke's present at the end too. A brilliant one shot!