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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To unbleaveable and you need to work on your flow it dosent make sence to call them Persons or person just give them names even if they have small parts it makes it give beleave abilaty besides its kinda dumb to have him act like Jiraiya thats just Not him
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome stuff keep it up :D
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was great please write more on this
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start, just remember to put some naruhina in there. Can't wait for the update.
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story update soon.
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job dragon!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! Nice lemon by the way. Can't wait for the newest chapter to come out. ^^
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your stories are great, do you plan to make a Naruto/TenjoTenge crossover with Naruto in the TenjoTenge universe?
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
will Hinata be one of the girls or will it be all oc's?
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice i like this better than the other version it flows a bit better