rate_review Reviews

Ahahahaha, that was too cute!! I love it :) All the innuendos with the porn novel were hilarious. Ninja leader and captain indeed. Naruto was never known for his subtlety, but then again Sasuke probably needed that blunt approach to get through his thick skull. They're both so stubborn! lol. I loved this story! Great work :)

I LOVED this story! Too cute for words!
Best line: And the Ninja Leader pounded the Captain into the floor all day and all night long.

LMAO... ok this had me crackin up so much through it. it's a nice twist on the normal story... and more realistic to how they act around each other... so great job :) nice ending

sexy do a follow up!

That was wonderful. And hot, definitely hot. I loved the whole setup with the novel and Sasuke's edits--very clever. I totally knew what Sasuke was going to do lol (it was still AWESOME though ^_^), but Naruto's twist with the new story was unexpected and wholeheartedly welcome, too! Everything came together really nicely, and I *loved* that whole final scene.

Great story! &hearts

~ lg