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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Would love to hear more of this story.
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was late when i found this and i didn't even log in, but i had to review! XD YOU ARE A GOD! Plz update soon! plz!!!! I luv Iruka's innocence...well his sum wat innocence. Plus Kakashi was just so...i can't even explain it, finish it plz!!! on my knee's here
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, FFnet can be hard on their writers some times. :D I think the story is fascinating. :D A little fastpaced sure, and grammar problems sure, but that's okay. You're getting out your idea, and it may spur on something better in the future. Good job writing so far. Poor Iruka. Makes me sad seeing him abused like that. Sniff sniff. sob. look forward to the next installment. :D
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was really nice to read.
only a few grammatical errors but nothing major that i picked up. hope u get a beta though.
only a few grammatical errors but nothing major that i picked up. hope u get a beta though.
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh Poor Ruka! Glad he's got a nice Kakashi to look after him. Great update, very moving.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update, and I'm sorry to hear about the people on ff! But the story is really good, and I like it still! I think it is cute that Kakashi gave Iruka a name, though I am curious, if Iruka is really 12 years old? I wasn't sure if that was solid or just an observation ^^
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious to see where this goes. I'm enjoying it so far. Thanks for posting. ^__^
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it...please update soon!
what will kakashi will do next?
what will kakashi will do next?
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This sounds really interesting! Though, I'm now curious about how the boy ended up with Orochimaru and what will happen to his afterwards! =)
I have to say that I like this plot line! ^^
I have to say that I like this plot line! ^^