rate_review Reviews

...*picks up Icha Icha and holds it in front of his face* you know, that special note would have been a lot better if you place it before the story /most kakashi like voice ever/

Hey I like the story but in the first 2 chapters it was hard to know what was said and thought... If you could make more understandable on those two parts it would really help in understanding their thoughts better.. Hope you write more updates for these two great stories...

I can't wait to see this caught up to a fine fine line, I'm on pins and needles waiting for it (and again, I'm not a fan of Naruto/sakura)

I'll say the last 2 chapters were decent, not really good, just decent. I say you have a lot more room to improve, but I know what is coming, so I know if I say something negative about it, you'll strive to do more. I can't wait to see how far Sakura's love and care for Naruto will go, keep it up.

you damn well better, I personally like Naruto and Hinata as a couple more, but you have a nice flavor on this. you also really don't need to explain inner sakura to anyone, I think it's clear she has a rather split personality, even despite training to get over it with Tsunade. good job on the second chapter, can't wait for the next one for 'A fine fine line'!

hmmm, a reverse on "a fine fine line".... I like it! keep up the good work.