rate_review Reviews

I thought of your story the other day and came back to read it over only to find out that not only is it finished, but it had a sequel. Not just any sequel either; this story promises to be just as good as Reading Totems. I'm so glad I found it! BTW, the ending of Reading Totems was awesome and I loved Kagi Taka.

So Paige is back and her love of Shino is still an inspiration to the word. They're going to have a lovely, bright little girl who'll be the apple of her parent's eye. I hate to think something bad is going to happen to them all again but it wouldn't be very realistic in a ninja village for no drama to happen. So I'll wait and see what your brilliant imagination is conjuring for us.

Ack! I forgot to review the story! Forgive me! *Bows* Anyways I do have to say that this is a great story so far and I love your character of Paige. Makes me almost wish that I was Shino. XD In all seriousness you are a great writer and chapter 4 was enough to prove it.

Shino dying to reconnect with Paige was sweet. If the chapter differed from the original plan, it was a good change. I'll head on over to The Code now and send some encouragement his way.

I don't think CPR will work this time! Better just stem the flow, call 911 and request that the blood bank be put on high alert for copious amounts of O neg blood!

Shino's only OOC when no-one's around, but that's to be expected not only because his circumstance has changed with age but because private / reserved people tend to only be their true selves around a select few people.

I'll give Casa a kick tomorrow, since both yours and Casa's stories are fantastic, I am expecting great things from the joint story.

Cool chapter! A blending of two separate stories by two different authors. This is promising to be really good. Looking forward to what's coming up next.

I'm impressed, though now that I think about it, I shouldn't be. Integrating Drake into your story was seamless, and added a hook that, for anyone who hasn't read The Code, will give them a sharp prod in that direction, though I doubt that there are many after all of the hints and outright bludgeons in that direction you've given.


Keep writing, or I'll start bawling like a child whose lost hid favorite toy, and trust me when i bawl i look very unpleasant. You wouldn't inflict that on everyone around me, would you?

That's not funny. Had I known that you were attempting to mesh these two univeris I would have given many more positive reviews until I became a general nusance to you an d you put chapters out at a much faster rate. I love your writing and really cant wait for your next chapter. (A late) Merry X-mas and a happy new year. Now please write the next chapter.

hey, you're still alive and kicking i see!

anyways, is Drake gonna be in any more chapters?

puking ones guts out that early in the morning SUCKS!! been there done that.

however, reading a convicted killer.....nope. best friends, ex-boyfriends, cousins, and other assorted personages...yes.



this chapter was awesome!

happy holidays!! (whichever one YOU want!)


miko ~_^

Ibiki's a master of interrogation. If he needs Paige, it must be a big deal. Dai sounds like interesting character. Is she gonna be in the next story?

oh you sly dog, posting a new story whist i was deeply involved in the personal molestation of my self. i've been in a nightmare on elm st/lost boys/ harry potter coma the past few months. not suprised i missed this really :)

What else can i say that i and others haven't said before? wonderful, brilliant, keep doing it, hurry up an update, etc...

you manage to inspire me no matter how horrid my writers block is (and it's been -so bad- the last ummm 6 months) and for that i thank you.

LadyS