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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Reading that chapter was like riding down a zip-line right into a stone wall. The ride kept getting better and better, but that sudden stop at the end HURTS. You better thank the gods that when it comes to good stories I'm a masochist - the more it hurts the more I love it - so you've guaranteed a reader for as long as the story lasts.
Auric
Auric
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again you have proven your self an excellent yarn spinner... I do hope to read more about what this mysterious investigation is all about... And what happens with Dai.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
neat, and another nice chapter. You know what I`d have liked to see, Paige working with members of Akatsuki or Team Hebi/Taka, now that would`ve been very interesting psychological-wise (Tobi, Hidan,Sasori,Jugetsu..., so many colorful characters)Keep up the good work and develop your characters.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dang it grizzly!!!! not cool to leave everyone hanging!!!
anyways, another awesome and great chappie though!!
laters! ~_^
miko
anyways, another awesome and great chappie though!!
laters! ~_^
miko
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Darnit!!! It's a good thing that you are such an awesome writer, or I'd be angrier at the evil cliffies that you create!!!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Paige is back! (punches the air happily) I hope the brains aren't what I think they're for.
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's me again!
I am glad to see that Paige and the others are back. It is so much like Shikamaru to avoid doing any kind of work and try to make it easier on himself. Anyways a good first chapter to an awesome story. Keep up the good work.
I am glad to see that Paige and the others are back. It is so much like Shikamaru to avoid doing any kind of work and try to make it easier on himself. Anyways a good first chapter to an awesome story. Keep up the good work.
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start, I expected no less. Since all good writers get better the more they write, I see you going nowhere but up.
with undying support,
Auric
with undying support,
Auric
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its great to see your work again and more of paige. funny and brilliant as always.
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, funny.
Thank you.
Thank you.