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for A Baby Story

by chilepie

schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad story, you portrayed the difficulty that many parents face when adopting non-infants well. I'm not a huge fan of altering character design just to fit certain molds. Sasuke is bigger and taller than Naruto, not the other way around. I know that many have a stereotypical seme/uke physical ideal, but that's the reality of the series. I'm also of a mind that the only way an author could realistically write a uke!Sasuke story is to make it AU because there's no way Sasuke of canon would be on the bottom, especially not to Naruto. But that's a whole 'nother thing.

Also one additional point, Autistic kids are not retarded. Those are two completely different issues. Many kids with autism are actually EXTREMELY intelligent, they just have trouble interacting with the world in a 'normal' way.
person kAT
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. God women and our saccarine-sweet image of babies, pets and what not. But the boys are cute. And it isn't MPreg, thank goodness!
I like!
Write MOAR!
person sugar
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me there more I hope you haven't forgotten about this story
person Anon
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please is this story going on? I really like it :)
person sugar
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Uncle Itachi here to the rescue!!!!!
person sugar
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I never get tired of reading this. Can't wait for more!!!! :D
person Anon
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please please update this story soon !!!!! Thanks :)
person sugar
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto and Sasuke :( But Itachi comes to save the day :) I can't wait for more chapters!
person sweetdreams
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please I can't wait for more chapters
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWW! uncle Itachi to the rescue! tachi's so cool. lol.