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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter UPDATE SOON.
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D!!!
I just really, really like this story, and I'm gonna have to read it again later! Agggh, the spanking, the slightest edge of domination in Kakashi, Sasuke in his lap... my motor is RUNNING XD
And on top of that, I like the meaning behind it ^^ I love Sasuke's reasoning for doing what he did, and now, yeah, I like thinking about the fact that he was extra pushy at the beginning because he was a bad actor ^__^ And the ending is really sweet, and a little sad, and it's not at all lame, or what you said XD I think it's great!
I really look forward to more of your stuff!
I just really, really like this story, and I'm gonna have to read it again later! Agggh, the spanking, the slightest edge of domination in Kakashi, Sasuke in his lap... my motor is RUNNING XD
And on top of that, I like the meaning behind it ^^ I love Sasuke's reasoning for doing what he did, and now, yeah, I like thinking about the fact that he was extra pushy at the beginning because he was a bad actor ^__^ And the ending is really sweet, and a little sad, and it's not at all lame, or what you said XD I think it's great!
I really look forward to more of your stuff!
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol
It was role playing all along!! (ALthough I must admit, I thought there was something off about how slutty Sasuke suddenly got too. ^^)
Keep up the good work!
It was role playing all along!! (ALthough I must admit, I thought there was something off about how slutty Sasuke suddenly got too. ^^)
Keep up the good work!
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WoW! That was awesome,I would say you have a winner on your first sex scene.
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay!
I really like your pushy, demanding Sasuke... he's so sweet, and sexy ^__^ And I love how they're so recklessly desperate for each other, once they start going.
And this was FANTASTIC for your first time ;) I like your vocabulary, and the fact that you're not afraid to use it ^__^
And more KakaSasu fans, I'm so excited!!!
Now, I'm dying to know what happens next... was it a shadow clone? Was the real Sasuke watching from the shadows? Is this a trap? I'm very much looking forward to more!
I really like your pushy, demanding Sasuke... he's so sweet, and sexy ^__^ And I love how they're so recklessly desperate for each other, once they start going.
And this was FANTASTIC for your first time ;) I like your vocabulary, and the fact that you're not afraid to use it ^__^
And more KakaSasu fans, I'm so excited!!!
Now, I'm dying to know what happens next... was it a shadow clone? Was the real Sasuke watching from the shadows? Is this a trap? I'm very much looking forward to more!
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.... SASUKE WAS A SHADOW CLONE?! *is now effing confused* haha. for being your first lemon; that was very well written! like a pro! The words and the story flow really well. And the .. imagery.. was very well done. being the perv i am; i could totally picture everything you wrote. haha. yeaaah. but now i want more! darn you and your cliff hanger! ^-^ update as soon as you can please!! :heart:
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha.. he almost beat the clock. One second to go and Sasuke's been snatched away! Poof! Gone!!! hehehehhehe
Kakashi is in sooooo much trouble. I wonder who found them. ^^
Keep up the great work!
Kakashi is in sooooo much trouble. I wonder who found them. ^^
Keep up the great work!
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I also am oneshot challenged. I feel your pain.
I can't wait to see what happens when i'm not hanging from this cliff anymore.
Good sex for a first time... I must applaud. :)
I can't wait to see what happens when i'm not hanging from this cliff anymore.
Good sex for a first time... I must applaud. :)
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
one word. ;) j/k!
Not bad. I'm looking forward to the rest of it.
Not bad. I'm looking forward to the rest of it.