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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Were, oh where hvae chapter 6 has gone?
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I love it. I want more of it.
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So good, So graet, Just can't wait for more.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!
keep at it ;)
keep at it ;)
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:)
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha I see three possible pairings for this story.
Naruto x Hinata x Hanabi x Hana
Naruto x Hinata x Hana x Sakura
Naruto x Hinata x Anko(no thx) x Hana
Haha yea rly Naruto is part K9 now.... so rly not that big of a stretch for Hana Inuzuka no?
Naruto x Hinata x Hanabi x Hana
Naruto x Hinata x Hana x Sakura
Naruto x Hinata x Anko(no thx) x Hana
Haha yea rly Naruto is part K9 now.... so rly not that big of a stretch for Hana Inuzuka no?
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but i've read better, the only way to make up for it and become a favorite is to be proliferous
AKA write more, write faster, gogogo
AKA write more, write faster, gogogo
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, the Double Rasengan was cool, but it wasn't all that. That super Rasengan, Jiraiya already used it so that didn't have much of a wow factor for me. The thing that I'm still trippin on, is the Rasenshuriken...he freakin threw it, and it grew by itself.
Now he knows that Hinata loves him, that's going to kick ass.
Plus, now with the Eight Tail thing, the Yondaime shows up...It's about time Naruto found out who his pops was. I also wonder if he's going to get some kind of special ability or insight from the Fourth (aside from learning his heritage).
As far as the story goes, I can only say one thing...giggity.
Now he knows that Hinata loves him, that's going to kick ass.
Plus, now with the Eight Tail thing, the Yondaime shows up...It's about time Naruto found out who his pops was. I also wonder if he's going to get some kind of special ability or insight from the Fourth (aside from learning his heritage).
As far as the story goes, I can only say one thing...giggity.
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is not clear so far that Shizune really died. One of the pains has removed some sort of mind from her. But it is unknown if this effect will be reversed when Pains real body is going to die.
Her status is kinda like that from Kakashi. It is assumed both are dead. But you know what they say about the word assume. It makes an ass of U and Me.
So, until it is 100% confirmed, both, Kakashi and Shizune might still live. Think of it ass a near death coma.
Her status is kinda like that from Kakashi. It is assumed both are dead. But you know what they say about the word assume. It makes an ass of U and Me.
So, until it is 100% confirmed, both, Kakashi and Shizune might still live. Think of it ass a near death coma.
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Perfect Chapter. Interesting Idea to make this after the Pain attack. Logically that leavys still Madara and Sasuke at bay, so they still are a threat.
I like the Harm idea, but I'm wondering which girls will be in besides Hinata.
I like the Harm idea, but I'm wondering which girls will be in besides Hinata.