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person manineko
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really nice.. i like it xD
person Nyanroll
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you finally wrote something after the long break. You are my favorite KakaSasu writer ever! There isn't enough kakasasu out there really. This one was really great. <3
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that first one was sweet/bittersweet. I liked it. But the second one, I really LOVE. I like the way you worked Sasuke up bit by bit, first just snorting it off, and all his aborted letters, and then FINALLY GETTING IT hehe. Even without explicit description, all the details about Sasuke wearing/feeling/smelling kakashi's gloves--how the leather felt and tugged at his hair, how the metal caught on his clothes slightly--and finally how he USED them were extremely erotic. Awesome.
person Anise
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(1/2) The first one was emotional but also rather sweet, I liked the comparisions of Kakashi and Sasuke going through similar things and the understanding Kakashi had for Sasuke. As for the second one, all I could think is that they're perfect for each other because only Sasuke could read that far under the underneath :)
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I've read this before somewhere but I don't know if it was here or somewhere else...I don't know, I STALK YOU! ha j/k. But you are an amazing writer. You develop characters in ways even the creators themselves wouldn't think of and really expand their background. I loved the whole Minato/Kakashi and Kakashi/Sasuke parallels in this because for some reason they're just so...believable. But then again your writing could convince me the world is shaped like a triangle and that we all decended from turtles. I hope you keep sharing stuff with us for a lonnnnnng time.

<3