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for The all purpose Naruto Mpreg.

by Leeana69

person Lid
schedule November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I enjoy mpreg and I dont find this the least bit insulting. haha. It was a good laugh, so thanks. :)
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was hilariously awesome. I am a fan of mpreg I also write fics with mpreg. I to hate it when there is plot holes with mpreg and the no pain magical born babies that are born in a blink of an eye.
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely hilarious. XD
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dear gods, that was hilarious. It gave a serious case of the giggles now and my brother thinks I've lost it. Thank you <3
person Anon
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha glad you made me read it! Ah I loved that >.> seriously it was sooo true I have read everything in this story in nearly every single mpreg I have come across!
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oi! I take exception to the author's note! I don't know if I'm the only one who's done it but I have continued a fic past Naruto giving birth *pouts* I thought you liked my stuff.

Other than the slight pique at the author's note, I loved it. Laughed my fluffy arse off at the girlfriends and their names and poor Na-chan's uke-ness. The speaking at the same time was funny as hell too.
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER CHERRY!

My absolute favorite part: "The twins ignored their father glaring at the rice with such hatred that it was nearly sobbing and trying to crawl off the table and back into the rice cooker."

That's a line with total win, right there. I can't read or think about it without bursting into giggles, and it's a good thing I don't have a rice cooker, or my future dinner would also be affected.

Oh yeah, and that last bit is hilarious. You know why.

All my love,

Dina
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL YOU'RE disturbed for writing this and I'M disturbed for enjoying it. Its like one of those parody movies but in writing...er typing? DAMN GOOD STORY you demented writer you LOL.
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol @ the rice tried to crawl off the plate. that made me laugh until i cried. i could actually picture sas being that silly.

great. i hope a plot bunny bites you really hard ^_^
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!! That was funny! And I hope a plot bunny, a LOT of plot bunnies come and bite you and infect you with the idea of twincest. I do believe you writing it would have me laighing so hard I'd wanna piss my pants. But this was good, and I loved it and your good-natured humor. I hope everyone else who read it took it as well as I did. I was just too funny not to. But thanks for the great story. ^^